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Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

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Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Sep 28th, '13, 23:15

feed- standing in the spotlight
a long keystyle literally didnt stop tried a little story but didnt work
as planned lol good practice though

Mr woodcock got the beaver attached
Flow keeps flowing flamers semen in ass
Id rather not dream of that crap i fuckin hate fags
I smack my cousin so fast that he thought he was straight
But hes known to bust-in fruits like squeezin a grape
On his knees and waits for a sticky situation
Better get the napkins its gonna reach ya face son
He didnt have the patience so he sliced his whole nut like operation
Now his partners gushin blood in the basement
Adams like so what and just ate it. I think he was wasted
Shits disgusting to witness when your as straight as a big dick
Just discussion of it im gonna punchem in his stomach
so i did gave him a jab and a quick uppercut
and after that i laughed kicked his lover in his last nut
all drenched in blood soaked in cum half opened up
I really need to leave his house like howd i even arrive
Need to speed before he burys me alive its quarter to nine
Hes a crazy faggot psychopathic one wrong move and youve had it
Hes always ahead of you wanting to give head to you
With razor sharp teeth could make a shark shriek
When he does fellatio he prefers dark meat
He better have rabies yo or thats an STD
A fucKin sex disease from overseas
Imported from seeds while on vacation
Swallowed more seeds than that of population
I just find it gross scary and quite humorous
That most fags that we know could be doing this
Jacking more men than a tow truck
Sniffin coca for stamina to blow nuts
Ok thats enough gayness ripped anus
Spit mixed with shit lubrication outdated
debated masterbation with it got burned inflammed its
dirtyness times fifty bitch theres nothin sick as this
So as i drove home from the scene cops with high beams
try to ask what ive seen i reply not much officer
He just gave me a wave i was honest brah
I was traumatized and my cousin died
his lover by his side and one nut in his mouth
Al bloody and nasty straight stuck to the couch
then the cops come..
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Re: Adam pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Sep 29th, '13, 22:39

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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Flamez » Sep 30th, '13, 04:45

Too much gayness written in this haha it's cool though nice read, and you're right it's good practice, but I liked it though.
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Sep 30th, '13, 12:51

Flamez wrote:Too much gayness written in this haha it's cool though nice read, and you're right it's good practice, but I liked it though.

yea lol was tryin somethin different some lines may go over peoples heads like the first few but overall just practice my cousin really is gay though :whistle:
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Oct 2nd, '13, 22:21

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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby VintageSlimBish » Oct 5th, '13, 06:36

Nice,.. read it in Eminems voice.
Cool if yoi're doing it for fun,
Bit if you're really a rapper make your own style.
Even if you like writing about killing, and gay people.. or w.e
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Get your own rhyme scheme.

That was the real slim shady rhyme scheme you used
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Oct 5th, '13, 12:08

VintageSlimBish wrote:Nice,.. read it in Eminems voice.
Cool if yoi're doing it for fun,
Bit if you're really a rapper make your own style.
Even if you like writing about killing, and gay people.. or w.e
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Get your own rhyme scheme.

That was the real slim shady rhyme scheme you used

yea this one's not my usual style didn't notice it was similar to Em tbh

but thnx guy :y:
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Francesco » Oct 8th, '13, 23:45

lol I can't wait for Pt.2
Good as usual... kinda more personal than what I've read from you.
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Oct 8th, '13, 23:50

lol thanks guy pt.2 probably wont be for a while but other series might start up :y:
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Francesco » Oct 8th, '13, 23:58

No problem... :y:
You've been taking all that very seriously & have been dropping pieces consistently so keep it up regardless.
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Nov 25th, '13, 02:35

Last bump this one was interesting
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Francesco » Nov 25th, '13, 08:52

It was interesting indeed... probably a bit slept on.
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby CanadaPure » Nov 26th, '13, 00:24

It was pretty disgusting in a funny way, your writing was actually better than normal too.
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin pt.1

Postby Just Silver » Nov 26th, '13, 00:26

Thanks guy lol
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