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Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 18th, '13, 03:18

BEAT: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D4NIC3WRouI
LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=167795

Hook (Sneaker):
Welcome to our carnival
Were we can grasp control of you all
sick twisted fantasies
go run and hide your families
dont fall asleep on our beats
just curl up between your sheets
This carnival is straight from hell
Sneak and blogger, does that ring a bell?

Sneaker:
im going to the carnival, the big one downtown
its bound to be a blast, you wont leave with a frown
gonna be nice creepy, halloween is right around,
the best part is the horror house, with zombies on the ground,
big and full of frights, in carts going round and round
where scary props and freaky sounds surround
Arrived at the place, my friends over by the gate
We’re walking past the head on a silver plate
The lines aren’t long, we won't need to wait
But the park won’t close its not that late
We take our seats, in the first row out of eight
Sitting back, we enjoy the wait,
The ride lurches forward and slowly creep towards our fate
Its dark, so for this im great, im in the house with my #1 mate
The ride starts in the kitchen, shadows making me jump
when all of a sudden the ride stops with a bump
Everyone else freaks out, and starts running out the front
We both jumped out, looking for the source of the thump
Looking down there he was, plumped down on his rump
A fucking dead body, this one wasn't there for fun
so me and my friend, we decided to hunt
because this man was murdered, he wasn't out for lunch
look man, thats a bite mark, someone took a munch
maybe the killer likes to eat people for brunch
Lets split up and find him, before he finds others to crunch
five minutes later i hear a scream,
this feels like something out of a dream
Running around the corner, darting past rows of teens,
a mans on the ground, and thats not whipped cream
people don't notice they think its a scene
I hear 3 more shouts, thinking this is a scheme,
to get more attention for the struggling theme
But then i see my friend, dangling upside down from a beam
I'm about to call the police, this is getting extreme
then i see a shadow behind me, and its my turn to scream
i turn around and its freddy Kruger from elm street

shadyblogger:
Walking around I see a statue of Freddy Krueger
He's looking scarier than J. Edgar Hoover
When he told Martin Luther King Junior
To go kill himself but Freddy said "I think it would behoove ya
To run fast" Shit Freddy is alive I go to grab the mace and
Realize I'm facing a tricky situation
Can't find the mace in my pocket so I do an about face and
Run the other way screaming "where are you Jason"
Meanwhile Freddy's chasing me around the whole damn place and
I'm looking for a hiding station and my heart is racing
Finally I find an abandoned tent and hide under it
Thinking I'm safe but that's just when the thunder hit
I crawl out and see Freddy looking at me and I wonder if
I'll survive as I say "I'm not ready to die Freddy you piece of fucking shit"
I pulled out my mace and sprayed Freddy in the face
And laughed like I told a joke
And said "You fight like you're some older bloke"
Freddy collapsed screaming and then went still
I left the fucking place and sat in my car and took a chill pill
Just as I finally calmed down and went to drive off
Freddy jumped out from under the car and stabbed me in my eyeball
I bled all over the fucking place worse than an abused whore
Freddy stabbed me a few more times in the head until I lay dead on the dashboard
And then Freddy took some of my hallucinogens
And then left ready to do it again

Hook:
Welcome to our carnival
Were we can grasp control of you all
sick twisted fantasies
go run and hide your families
dont fall asleep on our beats
just curl up between your sheets
This carnival is straight from hell
Silver and Demaz, does that ring a bell?

Silver:
I'm armed with a 380 on the way to Barnum and Bailey's
Didn't expect this shit or believed in zombies invading.. my territory
But the beginning of this glory is quite gory let me tell my story
Im in the car I'm about to park when this shit jumps on my hood
Thought I hit a deer I heard the bump and got shook
Have my pistol ready shells and some extras
I know I'm gonna make it a living Hell for the next one
As I proceed to sit this whole bit turned to a horror flick
Juggling giants zombified lions no tongues trying to cause riots
Im young ready to run with my gun silenced
Shotgun in a satchel in the back of the tires
I run for it cause these motherfuckers moving slow
Grab a gauge on my way back to the carnival
Black on black lock n load blood for blood
Shot a couple down now here's another one
They're all light skinned barely breathing
Red eyed demons whispering the devils secrets
Pistol whipped to brain bits running around pavement
Dodging and evading this situation till im ended
My bumpers bent license suspended renewals expensive
Survival is endless I've learned from the game systems
I need to drive out this area and get assistance
No way I'm winning I'm no leveled Victim

Demaz:
I'm walking down this cold and lonely ghastly place
These ghosts appeared and they look like they wanna smash my face
If I took a photo imagine how much fucken cash I'd make
I saw a crazed shooter run away screaming in a blast of rage
I ran away as fast as I could without looking back
Then I noticed I'm being followed by ghosts with hooks and gats
I met Silver, told him to hold my beer as I dove in
Landed on my ass not even touching the ghosts skin
He began to laugh manically, gradually grabbing my anatomy
Stabbing and gashing at me, thrashing my arms and motherfucken knees
I'm struggling to brake free and make a break for it quickly
A brown zombie appeared in front of me hoping it could have a feast
Scared shitless, I ran towards the ghosts, going white as teeth
One of the ghosts lunged with speed and went inside of me
Possessed, I kill everyone, and started killing myself
All is well now and I met all of these bitches in hell

Hook:
Welcome to our carnival
Were we can grasp control of you all
sick twisted fantasies
go run and hide your families
dont fall asleep on our beats
just curl up between your sheets
This carnival is straight from hell
Its Snake, whew fam, does that ring a bell?

Snake: SUBMIT YOUR MOTHER FUCKING VERSE YO

Hook:
Welcome to our carnival
Were we can grasp control of you all
sick twisted fantasies
go run and hide your families
dont fall asleep on our beats
just curl up between your sheets
This carnival is straight from hell
creepy carnival, does that ring a bell?
Last edited by sneakerheadshady on Dec 18th, '13, 03:27, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby Just Silver » Dec 18th, '13, 03:25

Good stuff
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby IBasicallyRage » Dec 18th, '13, 03:36

Holy. Shit.
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby CanadaPure » Dec 18th, '13, 03:37

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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 18th, '13, 03:49

Sounds pretty cool
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 18th, '13, 12:25

Horsebot3K wrote:Didn't read all of it, but my homies Sneaker and Demaz brought the good shit.

thanks horse :wub:
IBasicallyRage wrote:Holy. Shit.

what up man? lol
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby IBasicallyRage » Dec 18th, '13, 15:37

sneakerheadshady wrote:
Horsebot3K wrote:Didn't read all of it, but my homies Sneaker and Demaz brought the good shit.

thanks horse :wub:
IBasicallyRage wrote:Holy. Shit.

what up man? lol

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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby mdemaz » Dec 18th, '13, 15:56

You know how we do.
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby Just Silver » Dec 18th, '13, 17:17

Mdemaz surprised me good stuff
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 18th, '13, 19:56

IBasicallyRage wrote:tHIS IS SiCkkkk

thanks bud :happy:
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby Snakebeast » Dec 18th, '13, 20:35

Fuck. Im only half done.
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby Just Silver » Dec 18th, '13, 20:56

Menzo wrote:Y'all pulled through nicely with this, all did your things. I saw four different styles, none of you write similar to each other.

My favourites, if I had to pick, were Silver and Demaz.

Thanks guy we should collab soon :8)
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby Just Silver » Dec 18th, '13, 21:00

Nicee
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 00:33

Menzo wrote:Y'all pulled through nicely with this, all did your things. I saw four different styles, none of you write similar to each other.

My favourites, if I had to pick, were Silver and Demaz.


:y: I agree
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Re: Creepy Carnival Collab

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 19th, '13, 02:56

Menzo wrote:Y'all pulled through nicely with this, all did your things. I saw four different styles, none of you write similar to each other.

My favourites, if I had to pick, were Silver and Demaz.

thanks man :D
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