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Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

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Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

Postby Atone » Nov 24th, '14, 01:14

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(Verse) (Just Silver)
Verse maker, earth shaker imma land slider
Silver bullets for any fakes and vampires yall liars
Im The greatest writer in the entire ...scenario
Spitting fire balls Mario ,they sweat like cardio
I'm always in the direction In which they hardly flow
Naturally percepted while their on hold like dial tones
I'm here with Atone , got a-ton of E ,and we gotta key of weed
Unbelievably, like Ripley on TV, we rip MCs
Like Kenneth griffey knocking out the baseball seams
Evenly against all odds but spit faithfully
Never prayed to the man in the sky it's all make believe
Straight atheist , pacing and shit ,get an eigth of the piff, shits gone in min-utes
It's finished, like the track with the outro, with or without smoke
I tend to live with my eyes closed, trying to go grab the title
It's way up on the top shelf, got no stepper so I've got no help
The product tester so the dealers all know what will sell


(Verse)(Atone)
I crush bars, fuck the rest of you lames
stop ya heart and hit ya chest with these flames
you get checked, just accept i'm wreckin ya game
some of you to chicken to let me battle ya, fuck it
i get on a piece with you and rattle ya, shove it
you fuck up, get touched up like X at the lunch truck
you dumb fuck, better run, duck, before you get sun'd -FUCK
these drug addicts to high to spit anything worth carin about
so i corner em in an ally and start starrin em down
i hate these faggots i'm airin it out, ARE YOU SCARED OF ME NOW?
and i aint teasin a retard in a wheelchair
bitch i cut the breaks and pushed em down the stairs
crushed his lungs so he takes his last breath of air
spit in his face, walked away and just left em there
it aint fair, i just murdered a retard and everybody's laughin
and all he'll be remembered as is a drug addict cross dressin FAGGOT
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Re: Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

Postby shadyblogger » Nov 24th, '14, 01:16

Lol nice work guys
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Re: Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

Postby Just Silver » Nov 24th, '14, 01:18

Very weird sneak diss but I enjoyed writing this lol
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Re: Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

Postby Atone » Nov 24th, '14, 01:20

Just Silver wrote:Very weird sneak diss but I enjoyed writing this lol


i challange you to a battle where you run like a scarred bitch from her abusive boyfriend, and then, ask you to collab and you thought i'd keep it friendly? lol, go snort some coke
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Re: Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

Postby TheVipBro » Nov 24th, '14, 01:34

why doesn't silver record though, i remember only hearing a freestyle from u but that's it
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Re: Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

Postby shadyblogger » Nov 24th, '14, 01:38

The beef is real
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Re: Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

Postby Just Silver » Nov 24th, '14, 01:39

TheVipBro wrote:why doesn't silver record though, i remember only hearing a freestyle from u but that's it

It's because I don't have the right equipment and I haven't had a computer in years lol :'(
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Re: Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

Postby Just Silver » Nov 25th, '14, 16:09

Bump
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Re: Atone x Just Silver: R.I.P

Postby Just Silver » Dec 1st, '14, 01:50

Last bump till forever
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