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Are You Unbeatable?

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Are You Unbeatable?

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 31st, '08, 04:07

when did you think that you could be unbeatable against the Devil
are you for real cuz usually many aren't ready to battle
artillery means bringing plenty of ammo into the scene
so can you handle that Hell?

i've seen the silly things, they never win at all
it seems the guilty's free while the better men can fall
well beneathe, then build up walls conceiling them somehow
to filter out their dreams, putting filth in thee eyeballs
evil will indeed, fulfill thru debri
so drill thru or bow down
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Are You Unbeatable?

Postby Emadyville » Oct 31st, '08, 04:13

i've seen the silly things, they never win at all
it seems the guilty's free while the better men can fall


Sick line, thought the concept was good, rhymes were just okay, but that line was niccee
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Re: Are You Unbeatable?

Postby mcZu » Oct 31st, '08, 13:09

Nice concept, rhymes were not bad, style connects well
Overall a nice piece
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Re: Are You Unbeatable?

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 31st, '08, 18:27

I liked it I wish I could speak from experience but I can't
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