Tash8 wrote:and here's how deja vu's forced:
I'm a prime candidate for the gene to receive the drug addict trait.
^ that's not even fuckin proper english
Um, yes it is. It makes perfect sense and is grammatically correct.
to a harder prescription drug called Valium like yeah that's great.
^ yeah that's just soo great
Did your mom drop you on your head when you were little? He's quoting his own temporary physical satisfaction from the high he got from the drug.
plus let's not mention all the shit ass rhymes: "great, ate, steak, eight" almost reminds me of mockingbird..
Did your mom drop you on your head when you were little?
The rhymes are "candidate/addict-trait/matic-rate/gravitate/salivate/have-a-taste/graduate/yeah-that's-great/havin-8/haven't-ate/grab-a-plate/have-a-steak/have-at-stake/dad-I-think"
LOL, you don't even grasp the concept of multi-syllabic rhymes. No wonder you're such a clueless Eminem fan.
Look at my daughters face...
'Mommy somethings is wrong with dad I think!
^i've never heard anyone say Think like that...
Long A and long I sounds are similar in some dialects, and Eminem has noticed this.
It's similar to how he rhymes "mad enough to kill" with "bad enough to steal" in Rock Bottom. That's short I and long E sounds in most dialects.
Oh, but wait...you cited Rock Bottom as a song WITHOUT "forcing."
So I take a Vicodin splash it hits my stomach and ahh.
A couple weeks go by it aint even like im getting high.
^ didn't know AHH and HIGH rhymed but cool em..
Actually, depending on how you say "high," they do. But technically almost nothing in rap music actually rhymes. "Forcing" is when you either stretch to a ridiculous level, or when you completely alter the pronunciation of a word to make it work.
anyways Deja Vu HAS A DOPE CHORUS and the second verse is a classic but everything else about it I hate... the first verse was shitty, third verse was decent, beat was too happy
plus, his emotion was completely forced IMO, at least compared to Rock Bottom..
There wasn't much emotion in Rock Bottom, if you're talking about his delivery. There wasn't much emotion in his Deja Vu delivery, either. He underplayed both songs and let the words carry the weight.






