Sad at the end "AUDIO, full song"

by **xariuss** » Dec 6th, '05, 09:46

Yo, this is my first full song, and by hearing the final cut i can tell my errors and the postive stuff... so i'll learn off this one... anyways have a listen ya'll.. tell me what you'se think

http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1LW7 ... 4XJYBFCLW9

pls leave reply, of what u think... here's the lyrics if u can't understand propley

(Verse 1)
Have you ever got, your ass blasted off pot
an everything is serious, whether your laughing or not
cause the trash you got
had you passing to dust
you ain

by **HAYZI** » Dec 6th, '05, 20:26

Nice, i liked it, it was well writen and oyuve got ur feelings acros well.

propz

by **xariuss** » Dec 6th, '05, 21:51

thanks man, i might redo it to rap it propley

by **archangel603** » Dec 7th, '05, 01:00

it was tight, and itll be alot better when/if you rap better to the beat.. post it if you re-do it i wanna hear it

by **xariuss** » Dec 7th, '05, 07:11

yeah i might redo it propley , thanks

by **SilverAthlon** » Dec 7th, '05, 07:16

Real nice....luved da flow...

I reckon u cud have used a meaner voice...if u get wat i mean...
but otherwise nice work...keep it comin!

by **xariuss** » Dec 7th, '05, 10:15

thanks, yeah i wanted to use a louder voice, it's just my mic becomes distroted, i need to buy a proper mic, but thanks.. the flow wuda been better with more anger , so it may still yet to be re-done

by **Vettori** » Jan 6th, '06, 01:30

Your lyrics are way too plain ....Add more effects, and emotion, and meaning....It really bored me..I'm sorry for being honest....
Other then that....Nice attempt, All i can say is you need work
Peace yo keep it up

by **Rae** » Feb 13th, '06, 01:12

i liked it! :wave:

Sad at the end "AUDIO, full song"

Sad at the end "AUDIO, full song"

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