Bigray - Sex Slave

[tadpole25]

Kinda like a mix of Pony by Ginuwine and Sexyback by Justin Timberlake, but with a hiphop vibe

[CanadaPure]

I didn't mind it, as in the actual structure. I understand you're trying to be versatile, but overall I felt like the content was a bit on the cornier side. Then again, that's usually how I feel about songs in this style. Overall, not my style but still not bad.

[Atone]

at first it didn't rhyme and i almosat clicked out thinkin you was trollin, i kinda wish i did click out cuz i read thru the rest and it just, didn't work man, i was not feelin it, it was corny, and sorta boring to read, plus, you added the hook or chorus into the verse and just wasted space.