Enemy

[Tash8]

wrote in thsi in like 4 min, cuz i was pissed. not to many similes and not many metas either.. not to many multis but i was just practicing personals

[IceAxe]

you writin this was a waste of time, imo

personals seemed on point... the Kojack reference I could've done with out.

the multis that were there were decent.... flow was ok

Ok work I guess

[Tash8]

you writin this was a waste of time, imo

personals seemed on point... the Kojack reference I could've done with out.

the multis that were there were decent.... flow was ok

Ok work I guess

why was it a waste?

thx for feed

[IceAxe]

cuz there's no point in gettin riled up at someone over the internet, and spending time to write a 7 line piece about them.

[Tash8]

cuz there's no point in gettin riled up at someone over the internet, and spending time to write a 7 line piece about them.

but it's good for practice...

[James R.]

The personals were decent but everything else was lacking. This was pretty weak for you Tash. The emotion was decent, I could definitely tell you were pissed, but I gotta say I've seen a lot better from you and expected better from you. The flow was off, the multies were basic, and the kojack reference was like an after thought. As for the personals, like I said, they were decent, but personals are all about delivery and it wasn't there.

[Tash8]

^ gotta agree with you, it was pretty wack.. i guess i was too pissed to write at the time haha

[J Roc]

i cant see it