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Rare Writing

Postby Tash8 » Jul 9th, '07, 17:42

[Intro]
fuck fuck fuck fu-fuck fuck

[Verse 1 - Tash8]
I'm a cussing machine, tearing up the fuzz at the scene
I aint content im buzzed and i'm mean, giving less fucks
than a guy in a coma [break]
and u better believe what i'm saying cause it's sincere
plus it's true that all my buzz ends here [break]
because after this song, i'm quitting, and it wasn't fear
I just wanna be able to pursue every one of my dreams
I wanna prove that world's as flat as chick's tits here
even the men have bigger breasts than any chicks near
and now we gonna get back to the fu-fuckin' main topic

[Chorus X2]
I'm not real, I'm just a joke
[Overlay]I'm faker than hookers tits out
I'm not fake, I'm just a hoax
[Overlay]i'm a real as bush being a boy scout

[Verse 2 - Tash8]
its so fuckin exotoic how irritatin life can turn out to be
cause i figured out after cumming 8 times it hurt to pee
fu-fu-fu-fuck i'm in one of those fu-fuckin moods again


I usually wouldn't write a joke song but i was bored and decided to just write anything that was in my mind.
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Re: Rare Writing

Postby Tash8 » Jul 11th, '07, 03:58

anyone?
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Re: Rare Writing

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 11th, '07, 16:46

well as a joke song, u nailed it, it was a joke, there were some decent rhymes scattered throughout so it made it a better read then if they had not been there
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Re: Rare Writing

Postby James R. » Jul 11th, '07, 19:45

All that site updating that was supposed to happen a week ago fucked all my comments up cuz I definitely commented this. Anyways shit was funny man. As a bored joking kinda song you did exactly what you should have done and then you went and actually had some decent rhymes in there. Nice job tash.
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Re: Rare Writing

Postby Flamez » Jul 11th, '07, 19:55

haha that was funny had some good rhymes in there tash
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Re: Rare Writing

Postby Tash8 » Jul 11th, '07, 20:02

James R. wrote:All that site updating that was supposed to happen a week ago fucked all my comments up cuz I definitely commented this. Anyways shit was funny man. As a bored joking kinda song you did exactly what you should have done and then you went and actually had some decent rhymes in there. Nice job tash.


thanks man haha, yea i was tired of doing all these serious songs or shit like that, so i had to do something unusual

KB24 wrote:haha that was funny had some good rhymes in there tash


thanks for the feed :D
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