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When Shit Happens

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When Shit Happens

Postby Inzanity » Dec 16th, '05, 04:01

(Verse1)
When shit happens I lock myself away//
I just go to my room lock the door and pray//
Everytime I put my trust//
In some1 the realtionship turns to dust//
So I burn the duch//
Trying to get rid of the pain//
I feel like a lost kid in the rain//
With no parents to hug and hold//
Cause' even my parents have turned cold//
I've built up an emotional shield//
So I will no longer get played like a field//

(Course)
When shit happens//
I start rapping//
to release the anger//
to tell u the truth I don't even know who I am anymore I've become my own stranger//
When shit happens//
I start rapping//
to release the anger//
to tell u the truth I don't even know who I am anymore I've become my own stranger//

(verse2)
ya'll don't know Christina and to tell u the truth not even I can explain her//
She's some1 I don't wanna be and it hurts cause' I have no choice but to remain her//
I just wish I could change her//
Cause' I don't like who I've become//
And I know this song won't change me cause' I'll still be the same when these ryemes be done//
I'm so lost not even I can find me son//
I'm so far gone not even the Massiah could save me now//
And 4 any1 who hates me I don't blame u cause' even I hate me now//
shit is crazy wow//
it's got to the point where not even Eminem's music can help me//
I'm so cold not even Satan's lake of fire could melt me//

(Course)
When shit happens//
I start rapping//
to release the anger//
to tell u the truth I don't even know who I am anymore I've become my own stranger//
When shit happens//
I start rapping//
to release the anger//
to tell u the truth I don't even know who I am anymore I've become my own stranger//
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Postby Trigger » Dec 16th, '05, 04:29

yo, that was deep, but if writing this lyrics helps take some shit of ur chest keep doin it, cause ur good. pll may say other wise, but u r good


keep it up ;)
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Postby 555555 » Dec 16th, '05, 04:43

I'm way better tho cause i'm a king.
This a shout out to all my homies in Cell block 8. being in jail sucks cause you always have to masterbate. Except when a Jewish person goes to jail all my homies cheer they all make mince meat, out of his Rear. Word
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Postby em16 » Dec 16th, '05, 10:34

that was pretty deep.. hope you're feeling better now.. it was good thou!
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Postby stealth » Dec 16th, '05, 11:59

good shitt
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Postby AspirinE » Dec 16th, '05, 13:31

good shit indeed.
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Postby xariuss » Dec 16th, '05, 14:59

that was really good, nice work!
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Postby SoniK » Dec 23rd, '05, 21:45

as always empty promises, u get my respect

rhyme wit me sumtym aite? peace
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Postby DragonzEdge » Dec 27th, '05, 12:42

not to rain on your parade, but if you rap on that with a beat, you'll miss a couple of bars and throw your song off a bit. That ain't 16 bars
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Postby Inzanity » Dec 27th, '05, 16:22

DragonzEdge wrote:not to rain on your parade, but if you rap on that with a beat, you'll miss a couple of bars and throw your song off a bit. That ain't 16 bars


I don't plan on putting to a beat anyway. I'm not gonna record it.
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Postby SoniK » Jan 2nd, '06, 01:13

empty promises i actually think ur amazin u no...and its hard to make me say that!!! trust me girl

nuff luv
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Postby Inzanity » Jan 2nd, '06, 05:35

SoniK wrote:empty promises i actually think ur amazin u no...and its hard to make me say that!!! trust me girl

nuff luv



Wow thanx SoinK
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