A Father that has lived through a fatherless life.
Love and only Love Keep me going.
Love is the legs of my table.
The corner of my foundation.
I let my clothes express myself.
You now know me.
So who am I?
- SyNiKaL
Tash8 wrote:didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave
patwivo wrote:Tash8 wrote:didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave
i think it was supposed to be a poem....some poems dont rhyme
neways....i liked it but u kind of stole the whole father line from em
Tash8 wrote:patwivo wrote:Tash8 wrote:didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave
i think it was supposed to be a poem....some poems dont rhyme
neways....i liked it but u kind of stole the whole father line from em
that's why i just left, cuz even if it's a poem, it doesn't rhyme i dont liek it, to me Poem's with no rhymes is like a man with no dick.
Tash8 wrote:didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave
Tash8 wrote:that's why i just left, cuz even if it's a poem, it doesn't rhyme i dont liek it, to me Poem's with no rhymes is like a man with no dick.
Willystyle wrote:Tash8 wrote:that's why i just left, cuz even if it's a poem, it doesn't rhyme i dont liek it, to me Poem's with no rhymes is like a man with no dick.
I Agree poems that don't rhyme suck dick
shady4life! wrote:Willystyle wrote:Tash8 wrote:that's why i just left, cuz even if it's a poem, it doesn't rhyme i dont liek it, to me Poem's with no rhymes is like a man with no dick.
I Agree poems that don't rhyme suck dick
stop bein so narrow minded, and be more sensitive to other peoples work. Not all good poems hav to rhyme. This is a good poem and it doesnt rhyme.
SyNiKaL wrote:Was not made to ryhme . I was speaking on the emotions that were going through my body. If you dont like it, you can go to hell. I was just sharing a few simple statements on how i felt.
Tash8 wrote:SyNiKaL wrote:Was not made to ryhme . I was speaking on the emotions that were going through my body. If you dont like it, you can go to hell. I was just sharing a few simple statements on how i felt.
go to hell? wow, Never once did i say it sucked, I just said I WILL NOT FEED IT BECAUSE IT DID NOT RHYME. calm the fuck down..
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