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Postby SyNiKaL » Sep 9th, '07, 04:27

A Father that has lived through a fatherless life.
Love and only Love Keep me going.
Love is the legs of my table.
The corner of my foundation.
I let my clothes express myself.
You now know me.
So who am I?

- SyNiKaL
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Postby Tash8 » Sep 9th, '07, 04:35

didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave
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Postby patwivo » Sep 9th, '07, 05:04

Tash8 wrote:didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave


i think it was supposed to be a poem....some poems dont rhyme
neways....i liked it but u kind of stole the whole father line from em
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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Postby Tash8 » Sep 9th, '07, 05:07

patwivo wrote:
Tash8 wrote:didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave


i think it was supposed to be a poem....some poems dont rhyme
neways....i liked it but u kind of stole the whole father line from em


that's why i just left, cuz even if it's a poem, it doesn't rhyme i dont liek it, to me Poem's with no rhymes is like a man with no dick.
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Postby patwivo » Sep 9th, '07, 07:00

Tash8 wrote:
patwivo wrote:
Tash8 wrote:didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave


i think it was supposed to be a poem....some poems dont rhyme
neways....i liked it but u kind of stole the whole father line from em


that's why i just left, cuz even if it's a poem, it doesn't rhyme i dont liek it, to me Poem's with no rhymes is like a man with no dick.



hahaha that's funny :D
yeah i dont like poems that dont rhyme either but i'll still give em credit
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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Postby shady4life! » Sep 10th, '07, 21:49

Tash8 wrote:didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave


:n: this is creative writin tash, it dont hav to rhyme
If u dont like the way i act then blow me, i ride with the real peeps who know me.
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Postby Tash8 » Sep 11th, '07, 00:51

shady4life! wrote:
Tash8 wrote:didn't even rhyme, so i'ma just leave


:n: this is creative writin tash, it dont hav to rhyme


yes, but i won't feed stuff that won't rhyme..
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Postby Willystyle » Sep 20th, '07, 14:11

Tash8 wrote:that's why i just left, cuz even if it's a poem, it doesn't rhyme i dont liek it, to me Poem's with no rhymes is like a man with no dick.


I Agree poems that don't rhyme suck dick
Hot enough to fry a egg in the shade.
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Postby shady4life! » Sep 20th, '07, 23:41

Willystyle wrote:
Tash8 wrote:that's why i just left, cuz even if it's a poem, it doesn't rhyme i dont liek it, to me Poem's with no rhymes is like a man with no dick.


I Agree poems that don't rhyme suck dick


stop bein so narrow minded, and be more sensitive to other peoples work. Not all good poems hav to rhyme. This is a good poem and it doesnt rhyme.
If u dont like the way i act then blow me, i ride with the real peeps who know me.
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Postby Tash8 » Sep 21st, '07, 01:46

shady4life! wrote:
Willystyle wrote:
Tash8 wrote:that's why i just left, cuz even if it's a poem, it doesn't rhyme i dont liek it, to me Poem's with no rhymes is like a man with no dick.


I Agree poems that don't rhyme suck dick


stop bein so narrow minded, and be more sensitive to other peoples work. Not all good poems hav to rhyme. This is a good poem and it doesnt rhyme.


wow, i never said anything about his work but to me RHYMING is essential, so my feed to him would not help him, so stop worrying about it.
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Postby SyNiKaL » Sep 25th, '07, 19:09

Was not made to ryhme . I was speaking on the emotions that were going through my body. If you dont like it, you can go to hell. I was just sharing a few simple statements on how i felt.
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Postby Tash8 » Sep 26th, '07, 00:24

SyNiKaL wrote:Was not made to ryhme . I was speaking on the emotions that were going through my body. If you dont like it, you can go to hell. I was just sharing a few simple statements on how i felt.


go to hell? wow, Never once did i say it sucked, I just said I WILL NOT FEED IT BECAUSE IT DID NOT RHYME. calm the fuck down..
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Postby SyNiKaL » Sep 26th, '07, 03:53

Tash8 wrote:
SyNiKaL wrote:Was not made to ryhme . I was speaking on the emotions that were going through my body. If you dont like it, you can go to hell. I was just sharing a few simple statements on how i felt.


go to hell? wow, Never once did i say it sucked, I just said I WILL NOT FEED IT BECAUSE IT DID NOT RHYME. calm the fuck down..

Im actually very calm. Im not the one typing in all caps. I think you need a chill pill. I was just backing myself up. I was just explaining what i wrote and what it meant. ChiLLLLLLLLLLL
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Postby patwivo » Sep 26th, '07, 03:57

hey synikal, stop being a cry baby and SHUT THE FUCK UP :-$
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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Postby Tash8 » Sep 26th, '07, 04:11

patwivo wrote:hey synikal, stop being a cry baby and SHUT THE FUCK UP :-$


thank you

I did not disrespect your poem or whatever, I just did not want to feed it because it does not rhyme simple as that...
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