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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby Eedee » Jan 16th, '13, 06:57

The first guy was wack. Whatever. Moving on.

CP came in strong with his first few bars and captivated me. He then carried on to wipe my ass with his rhymes and leave my teeth chattering from the shivers as they crept up my spine. What I'm trying to say is that, CP, I think you do better on these types of tracks where you have a set direction you want to take and you take us there with no holds bars. It was dope. Your introspective side (this had a sort of storytelling feel to it) is phenomenal.

Painkiller, my erection grew harder as I moved from CP to you. I had a feeling you somehow carried on his message about the spiritual/demonic/atheist type thing. You didn't have as many complex rhyme schemes as CP did, but I think your lines were just as hard hitting in the lyrical way, maybe not technically though. You're getting better with each drop. It's awesome.

EmTV, this is it. You're the last verse. I had erections from the previous two, it's up to YOU to make me climax. And the dick-cutting line had me edging, bro. As Geno said, work on your formatting and structure, it clears up ambiguity of the flow and helps us decipher rhyme schemes. I see you had some multis in there and that was nice to see, and this is your first time drop? Nice!!

In the end, my keyboard is sticky and I'm happy about it. This was awesome and fun, I hope we can do more of these in the future!

Good job everyone. :y:
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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 16th, '13, 07:00

Eedee wrote:The first guy was wack. Whatever. Moving on.

CP came in strong with his first few bars and captivated me. He then carried on to wipe my ass with his rhymes and leave my teeth chattering from the shivers as they crept up my spine. What I'm trying to say is that, CP, I think you do better on these types of tracks where you have a set direction you want to take and you take us there with no holds bars. It was dope. Your introspective side (this had a sort of storytelling feel to it) is phenomenal.

Painkiller, my erection grew harder as I moved from CP to you. I had a feeling you somehow carried on his message about the spiritual/demonic/atheist type thing. You didn't have as many complex rhyme schemes as CP did, but I think your lines were just as hard hitting in the lyrical way, maybe not technically though. You're getting better with each drop. It's awesome.


So what you're telling me is, Pain and I aren't half bad for just starting to drop stuff a few days ago? :y:
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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 16th, '13, 07:01

Fuck, so I'm the weakest? how fucking lame.
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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby CanadaPure » Jan 16th, '13, 07:02

PAINKILLƎR wrote:Fuck, so I'm the weakest? how fucking lame.


Painkiller, my erection grew harder as I moved from CP to you.


Smh Pain.
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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby Eedee » Jan 16th, '13, 07:02

Did I say that? No. Sensitive, much??

And CP, yes. You guys are developing nicely. :)
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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 16th, '13, 07:04

You didn't say that, but it is indeed implied.
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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby Eedee » Jan 16th, '13, 07:08

Not really. I said your verse was awesome. *EmBrainDamageVoice* WHAT MORE DO YOU WANT FROM ME? *endvoice*
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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jan 16th, '13, 07:11

My rhyme schemes suck, I suck technically. I understand, I don't need to read between the lines. I see how it is, and don't try to run from me you'll just make it worst.
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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby Eedee » Jan 16th, '13, 07:14

PAINKILLƎR wrote:My rhyme schemes suck, I suck technically. I understand, I don't need to read between the lines. I see how it is, and don't try to run from me you'll just make it worst.


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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby EmTV » Jan 16th, '13, 13:13

I was the weakest, but in comparison to the three of you, that doesn't necessarily mean bad.

Self ego-boost. :y:

Thanks Eedee. ;)
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Re: [Collaboration] 4 by 16 Cypher

Postby Eedee » Jan 16th, '13, 17:38

Yup, no problem! Hopefully more collabs like this will happen.
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