CP came in strong with his first few bars and captivated me. He then carried on to wipe my ass with his rhymes and leave my teeth chattering from the shivers as they crept up my spine. What I'm trying to say is that, CP, I think you do better on these types of tracks where you have a set direction you want to take and you take us there with no holds bars. It was dope. Your introspective side (this had a sort of storytelling feel to it) is phenomenal.
Painkiller, my erection grew harder as I moved from CP to you. I had a feeling you somehow carried on his message about the spiritual/demonic/atheist type thing. You didn't have as many complex rhyme schemes as CP did, but I think your lines were just as hard hitting in the lyrical way, maybe not technically though. You're getting better with each drop. It's awesome.
EmTV, this is it. You're the last verse. I had erections from the previous two, it's up to YOU to make me climax. And the dick-cutting line had me edging, bro. As Geno said, work on your formatting and structure, it clears up ambiguity of the flow and helps us decipher rhyme schemes. I see you had some multis in there and that was nice to see, and this is your first time drop? Nice!!
In the end, my keyboard is sticky and I'm happy about it. This was awesome and fun, I hope we can do more of these in the future!
Good job everyone.
