NEW - Couple Screws Loose

[Solace]

man u did take your time to come up wit a good piece of writing ,, they did mention some staff about your chorus before ,, but looking at it know .. it looks hot and cool for me .. so i like it though ,, talking about the verses ,, i liked the 1st more rather than the 2nd ,, the 1st is sick in term of flow and rhymes ,, but the 2nd was off in some areas ,, n u were repeating words like ( loose twice ) ( shit three times at the end of each sentence ) i don’t know but if u pick other words that could rhymed with them is better than repeating them .. so gd post man ,, overall 8/10

Thanks man, couldnt ask for anything better. The reason i rhymed "shit" 3 times is cause 1 of them is i rhyme it like in an accent so it fits well. Im glad you liked it, it takes me about 20-30 minutes to write my pieces, so i guess that would be a good amount for you too.

Lol @ Kez. Isnt that pic from the zelda cartoon er something

[Solace]

it's from a old horrible Zelda game that is often considered one of the worst games ever

I'm such a geek (beats self up)

i never knew it was possible to have a horrible zelda game...

[Kez]

it's from a old horrible Zelda game that is often considered one of the worst games ever

I'm such a geek (beats self up)

i never knew it was possible to have a horrible zelda game...

Well CD-i managed it.

[Arabian Shady]

lmao dude that was hilarious, i liked the fact that you acknowledged the sudden ego thing, but still kept it on track, i think its a fun track 2 do,flow was sick, no probs with that, humour was top notch(i've told you that like a gazillion times,lol)
i liked it man, every couple of posts, a drop like this shows creative humour,which in itself is genius
wiked
Peace

luv the ball scratching line!!!!

[Solace]

lmao dude that was hilarious, i liked the fact that you acknowledged the sudden ego thing, but still kept it on track, i think its a fun track 2 do,flow was sick, no probs with that, humour was top notch(i've told you that like a gazillion times,lol)
i liked it man, every couple of posts, a drop like this shows creative humour,which in itself is genius
wiked
Peace

luv the ball scratching line!!!!

Thanks a lot man Everyone needs something like this Im glad you liked it.

[Requiem]

Ur the punchline rap has been missing the rap game is seriously lacking right now. it's sites like this that let us know that there's still real rap out there.

good drop shadymademe. almost 3 pgs of posts. hot dog

[Solace]

Ur the punchline rap has been missing the rap game is seriously lacking right now. it's sites like this that let us know that there's still real rap out there.

good drop shadymademe. almost 3 pgs of posts. hot dog

lmao thanks...yet again?