CanadaPure wrote:Was alright. I think both of you still have a lot of growing to do as far as writing goes, but it wasn't bad. Bigray, I'm seeing lots of improvement from you and that makes me happy because I know how much you like writing. Can't speak much on silver, because I haven't seen much of his writing. But it was decent.
Basically this. Both of you have some room to grow, especially bigray. Although I see improvement in bigray, but at times it just feels as if he's trolling us lol, but I know that's not the case.
I didn't feel as if there was any chemistry here, just verses thrown together, ya know?
