Just Silver X bigray - New Chemistry

[Just Silver]

Was alright. I think both of you still have a lot of growing to do as far as writing goes, but it wasn't bad. Bigray, I'm seeing lots of improvement from you and that makes me happy because I know how much you like writing. Can't speak much on silver, because I haven't seen much of his writing. But it was decent.

thanks there will be more coming soon

[Eedee]

Was alright. I think both of you still have a lot of growing to do as far as writing goes, but it wasn't bad. Bigray, I'm seeing lots of improvement from you and that makes me happy because I know how much you like writing. Can't speak much on silver, because I haven't seen much of his writing. But it was decent.

Basically this. Both of you have some room to grow, especially bigray. Although I see improvement in bigray, but at times it just feels as if he's trolling us lol, but I know that's not the case.

I didn't feel as if there was any chemistry here, just verses thrown together, ya know?

[Eedee]

Please don't shorten my name to "ED" lol, it's short enough

[Just Silver]

thanks for the feed guy next projects a topic

[Eedee]

Please don't shorten my name to "ED" lol, it's short enough

Never again Eedee I promise from Canada all the way to Alaska .

:3

[Just Silver]

i gotta poop ill be back