can u pls check n feed...need it for a song

[polluted]

SUGAR

REFRAIN:

Sugar ... That’s what I called you cuzz ... I go crazy when I behold you
Your image stalking me ...Your thoughts are lurking me … I told you


Baby, why I have to cry when you’re not close to me?
Your sweet face is so charming I’m losing my words n can’t speak
Every time I approach you my heart jumps outta me n start racing
Your sweet voice mesmerizes my limbs and brain
I cannot refrain from keep looking at you every time you there
You taking me deeper in life and without you I can’t start feeling
Life’s so killing me and cuts my veins when I don’t hold you
Every breath you take I thank God he created you to live
Every step you make I feel I need to be by your side forever
Thought you’re far makes me sadder and sadder
I keep going just because I know I need you
My blood keeps flowing just because I know I live you
I stay faithful cuzz I don’t need no any other
I’ll smother with kisses the ground you passed by
I’m hand-cuffed without you but I will fly
Cuzz I know you share that feeling n you wait me too
Baby, the moment we meet will make my life complete
You captured my dreams n it makes it even more sense
Cuzz I have you in my reality n my dreams are dense

Sugar ... That’s what I called you cuzz ... I go crazy when I behold you
Your image stalking me ...Your thoughts are lurking me … I told you

[Rain Matrix]

kinda hard to follow but for some reason I liked it

[polluted]

thank u dude...The flow hard to go with? What can do to straighten it? I need it smooth cuzz it's gonna go against house sample...

[polluted]

DAmn ppl!!! CAn u quit simply lookin at it n say somting? Yall can read & type here right?

[yoshi]

i like it in general, it's sweet yeah, seems to me like the flow's hard to go at times, but i can't tell you what to do to make it better..

[polluted]

i like it in general, it's sweet yeah, seems to me like the flow's hard to go at times, but i can't tell you what to do to make it better..

lol...eh...lemme translate u yosh: It's the worst shit I've ever seen but since we're cool I call it sweet...

lmao...

[yoshi]

rofl why always when i'm tryin to be nice, people think i'm jokin or bein sarcastic


maybe because i always am?.. rofl but i really liked it.