Verse 20th January

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

was just writing and seeing were it took me, no concept or anything just a bog standard verse

i can do it pen pencil or crayon
i still lay on untill the day gone
see that the timing of my rhyming is on point
like i be miming when im rhyming on this joint
the clock will tick on till i lock my spit gone
but i talk and slip none n know i have the last laugh
as i smash fast what they thought i wouldnt blast past
so really i see i bring reality to what i thought was only fantasy
for a fan to say you were grand today
so i planned the way scanned to slay
any man who weigh a foot in my way
so i go as i flow on a lonely road
the only mode available to be paid in full
or ill be made a fool, but succes i packed plenty
then i backed twenty wack men tae try resent me
as i present free skill n they re-invent feeble
in a tree full of week tools, you still aint the sharpest branch
you take the easy way ill conquer the hardest chance


Explination - Talk/Tock - as the clock ticks on it tocks and i slip none/i talk (as in rapping) and slip none

[Arabian Shady]

THAT WAS DOPE MAN
all ur other 1's(since i've joined) havnt made ne sense, but this 1 was like out of the park.
wiked shit
peace

could you feed mine, i want a review frm one of the tr gr8's-its called half mast

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

THAT WAS DOPE MAN
all ur other 1's(since i've joined) havnt made ne sense, but this 1 was like out of the park.
wiked shit
peace

could you feed mine, i want a review frm one of the tr gr8's-its called half mast

thx man

n yeh i aint been at my best writing wise for a while

[SajN]

Nice drop Bar
I like the rhymes you used and the flow was ok too.

I like these lines:

but i talk and slip none n know i have the last laugh
as i smash fast what they thought i wouldnt blast past

Keep It up.

Can you feed mine too: The Future ?

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Nice drop Bar
I like the rhymes you used and the flow was ok too.

I like these lines:

but i talk and slip none n know i have the last laugh
as i smash fast what they thought i wouldnt blast past

Keep It up.

Can you feed mine too: The Future ?

thx man

[Steve Spag]

Nice drop man. Deffinetly liked what you did there. I liked your rhyme scheme for the begining of it, havn't seen it done like that in a while, haha.

If you got time, check out my latest piece "Victory" on this page and let me know what you think, I'd appreciate it, haha.

[Rain Matrix]

I liked tha clock reference... good stuff