NEW - Loser

[Solace]

lol

[Dawgs]

When did you start writing songs?
Where is this verse for?

[Solace]

When did you start writing songs?
Where is this verse for?

A couple months ago.

And i think you mean "what is this verse for", right? Its for getting my feelings out for the guy im talking about in the song.

[Robbie G]

It was alright. Was it about something that actually happened?

I almost feel like it's too generic, but maybe not if it's about real experience.

Keep it up.

[Solace]

It was alright. Was it about something that actually happened?

I almost feel like it's too generic, but maybe not if it's about real experience.

Keep it up.

Yeah it happened today so im pretty pissed and the guy wont leave me alone about it.

Thanks btw,

[The Toy Soldier]

I liek it expresses anger shows true bravery.

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

thats badass

[Solace]

I liek it expresses anger shows true bravery.

Thanks again

thats badass

Thanks to you too

[Solace]

Bumpity bump bump, bump bump...

Finished first verse.

[neversnooze]

sorry about your lose shady. it didnt rhyme as much and it was like reading a letter.

there was nothing unique about this write and it sounded like an original(something most ppl have already written)

overall it was ok

[Solace]

I dont see how it didnt rhyme much, but thanks. Yeah its pretty generic. Thanks for checkin man

[Solace]

BUMP im done.

[Emadyville]

I think it was just ok. Nothing special, the rhymes were nothing special, and like dude said was kinda like an e-letter or something, not knocking you you said this shit happened, that's still how it comes off tho. Not the greatest i'm not going to lie, should scrap this one, you can do better.

[Solace]

I think it was just ok. Nothing special, the rhymes were nothing special, and like dude said was kinda like an e-letter or something, not knocking you you said this shit happened, that's still how it comes off tho. Not the greatest i'm not going to lie, should scrap this one, you can do better.

Really? Damn. Thanks for the honesty tho Should i really just scrap it, or could i like do something to make it better?

[Requiem]

i thought it was decent. ^like he said, nothing too special, but concept was great. and i can feel the emotion there. sucks that it happened, but it's good to have a medium to vent ur anger.

keep it up, man. just hone ur skill, keep grindin, u'll get there like i started at 14, i'm 17 now and ill.
ur 13, and u got years smooth out ur own style. i can see the potential