by EminemBase » May 24th, '11, 00:29
I don't think he had to have some rational reason for putting the lines there.
I think as usual he started to write aimlessly and then it became what it should be.
You can spot the pattern in many of his songs because in his own words, he follows his pen or, sees where his pen takes him or whatever.
You can see the same thing in "Mosh". He wastes a good proportion of the first verse talking about himself because, he doesn't know how to begin so starts with himself, and then it gradually gets more consistent and relevant to the theme.
And you can see the same thing in "You're Never Over". Starts rapping about himself and just aimlessly following his pen, then it becomes a Proof tribute. But he should of gone back and re-wrote the first verse in my opinion as it ruins the fucking song.
I've now decided that in my eyes, "Difficult" is a much better tribute and he fucked up with "You're Never Over". The second verse, is fantastic and really gets to a brilliant height at one point, apart from the god nonsense... but the first verse... fucking mentioning Just Blaze and, a Pumpkin line etc. - it's just, it ruins it. Followed his pen, but partially ruined the song.