WesT & Danny Thomas - Love Song (2nd Single) Real Hip-Hop

[TheOfficialThomas]

New track from me and WesT's collab mixtape this is the 2nd single.. to give you guys an update we've done 6 songs in 6 days we want the tape to have 20 tracks with 2 solo ep's with 5 tracks attached each.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_Vjv8AI29g

leave your comments and opinions..
Take care,
Thomas.

[TheOfficialThomas]

Sorry forgot to post link to feedback but I left feedback on 2 or 3 tracks this week.

[GibbzyTrShady]

Beat is killer, and your flow an delivery is sick (First Verse)
2nd verse is okayy not as good as first flow goes off once or twice a lil but other than that 2nd verse is all round pretty good,
Mixing is good and quality is overall nice
Hook is catchy and lyrics are tight
Pretty good song all round though keep dropping!

[Brownwall]

That was a really great song. Beat was nice (where'd you get it?), lyrics and rapping were on point, jus a few apparent slip ups in the second verse, but not anything significant. Track is also well-mixed, sounds good, and well blended. I also liked the concept.
First verse was probably better overall, consistently dope delivery and flow, but one thing that was enjoyable about the second verse was the change-ups in tone, delivery, flow, etc., kept things fresh. So yea, you could both take something from each other.
I really liked the sort of bridge thing at the end, that sounded nice.
For improvement, and this is just nitpicking, things I'm still working on myself, 'cause overall the track is really sick, but I guess you could've put more into the editing of the chorus, make it sound more different than the verses, added more to it (overdubs, ad-libs, effects). Also, you could continue to work on mixing the vocals, I would probably bring down the volume on the vocals a bit. And finally, maybe rap on more professional beats to give your tracks a bigger sound if you're looking for that.
But anyways, like I said before, dope ass track, keep it up. Check out my group's stuff if you find time.