Tornado: Mental Asylum

[Tornado]

Also check out the info thread for "Raw As Fuck" here viewtopic.php?f=54&t=107699

Produced by: Bankz. Recorded by: Bankz @ Bankz’s studio. Lyrics & Mixed by: Tornado

(1st Verse) This the mental asylum/ is the place you arrived in/ and just so you know/ every lunatic is hiding like/ creatures of the night in place/ it’s designed in mud/ this is our field/ step here, you dying/ stop the goddam crying/ cos the things our minds in/ is torture, murder murder/ so ain’t no denying/ ain’t nothing surviving/ we hungry and conniving/ you can’t go home though/ all our victims trying/ lock em up in cages/ let them feel the hatred/ of what we suffered/ now it’s turn to play the game if/ we were the hunters/ and you were the prey/ some victims can’t take it/ some try and get away/ through escaping or suicide/ but if you stuck here and ain’t murdered/ you start to get crazy here/ now you can join the legion/ or get murdered slow/ you can’t blame us blud/ this the only thing we know

(Hook) Try and try me/ cos our minds be/ oh fucked up/ and oh so grimey/ hoodlum I be/ you can’t hide see/ play the game or quickly die (×2)

(Post Hook) We creatures of the night/ we are lurking around (lurking around, lurking around)/best watch your step/ you get murked with no sound (murked with no sound, murked with no sound)/ no matter what you do/ the big curse is around (curse is around, curse is around)/ so you can either join/ or get murked by us now (murked by us now, murked by us now)

Mental Asylum
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[DƎRDYPK]

i like this
lol @ "if this track had a video it would look like this"
that was sick though
real laid back track but still wicked at the same time
I'm real interested in hearing Raw as Fuck

[Tornado]

Cheers Derdy bruv for checking

[Scrubz]

Alright, track was a little boring not much energy in it which kinda disappointed me. I really liked the beat and your flow at times. Both the delivery and flow could use work, it was shaky threw out. I also think you need to annunciate your words better, they sound a bit hmmm... Slopy.

As for the theme and intro and outro.... Pretty sick bro, have to give it to you there. Keep practicing, keep at it and keep improving

Please feed my new song and freestyle I would like to hear your feedback brotha!

[B.A.D.]

The hook is a masterpiece, damn I love the idea of it

I liked it, short long song tho', I dont like it like that, that its a long song but its only 1 verse, 1 hook & a bridge... you could maybe add a little more... I dunno, a guitar solo at least. Cuz like someone above me said, it makes it pretti boring.

the verse was good, I like the imagery you project with your rhymes, the lyrics are cool. I liked it.
nice lil track, I loved the hook.

[Tranquil]

woah!

im surprised by this, this is fucking dope for real,

the intro is good as, really put me in the mood for some dark shit, and that you delivered

the hook is speechless, that shit is great!

also i love the cover aswell

your flow and everything was great, i can complain one bit on this song man!!

5/5

[Steve Spag]

Like Wasnut said it's a good track it just lacks the energy it needs. Lyrics are actually pretty good and I see what you're trying to go for with the flow it just sounds too forced. I used to have the same problem, you just gotta get comfy and let your natural voice out and it'll sound a lot better.

Other than that, I really liked the beat and your intro/outro suited it very well. Creepy feeling!

Keep it up man!

[Tornado]

Cheers for the feed ya'll, appeciate it