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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 21st, '08, 10:54

i like the lyrics from the verse..sick :y:
freestyle was okay :y:
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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby mcZu » Jul 21st, '08, 15:15

Man your flow is crazy :y:
Lyrics are great, delivery is great :b:
This is the first I heard somethinf from you, it's crazy man.
You have some sick rhyme schemes, and that freestyle was insane :y: :y:
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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby mcZu » Jul 21st, '08, 16:47

McMaybe wrote:
mcZu wrote:Man your flow is crazy :y:
Lyrics are great, delivery is great :b:
This is the first I heard somethinf from you, it's crazy man.
You have some sick rhyme schemes, and that freestyle was insane :y: :y:



Thanks man ; )


I've had two albums done, I'll see if I can upload some of my newer music.


Thar would be great :y:
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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby Robbie G » Jul 21st, '08, 19:29

You've already done two albums?
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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby Robbie G » Jul 21st, '08, 20:02

McMaybe wrote:
Shady Babie wrote:You've already done two albums?



Yeah. I had "Kindergarten Rapper" in 2006, and I had Return Of the Jude in 2005 after my Mixtape "Taste Is Tact" in 04.


were could I find those?
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Postby Tornado » Jul 22nd, '08, 00:04

yo i always wondered how you rapped...it'd be nice to hear the old albums
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Postby randomghost » Jul 22nd, '08, 21:27

hot verse man.. :worship: :worship: :worship: hot flow :worship: keep it up :y:
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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 24th, '08, 03:21

flow was good
tho it got fuckin annoying no offence
it was ok
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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 24th, '08, 08:53

McMaybe wrote:
sticcy z wrote:flow was good
tho it got fuckin annoying no offence
it was ok


What was annoying (out of curiosity).. I mean, if you have a negative comment please explain. :y:

well it was good man dont get me wrong im not hating on you at all
it was just the fact that the flow was just the same shit goin through the whole thing
idk how to explain it
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Postby Kez » Jul 24th, '08, 18:11

The verse was just sick
Loved the flow and the "dissed God the night before" line just made me laugh
Beat is sick and quality sounds fine
I loved it basically
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Postby Vettori » Jul 24th, '08, 20:56

Ur flow is crazy bro haha. I get angry about it, but its a good angry :D God damn
Second verse wasn't as good as the first but ...The first verse did Kill it.
Now im more anxious to hear some new shit... kept me entertained the whole time. :b: :b: :b: :b: :b: several beers to yu
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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby Xray » Jul 28th, '08, 08:48

I'm breath-taking-a-breath, taking a rest,
breaking a back bone bent backwards back to the basements...

sick.
the rhymes I spit are panoramic - across boards,
I rock a cross... but dissed god the night before,

:laughing: ill.
were like the justice league, minus the justice we-,
mine if we just take a peep at your daughters, pee!
I dont touch boys I dont want a priest to get pissed!
"little keester get with the age of touching kids"

haha shit man that was sick as fuck :b:

lyrics are way above average :y:
flow on the verse wasn't 100% because the lines had very little breath breaks and therefore your flow got forced i think. delivery is cool to.

the freestyle has much better flow because better breathing breaks and lines are sorted out well for the beat :y:
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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby Mc Cubz » Aug 10th, '08, 01:45

impressive.
flow is bang on and nice and playfull.
mixing is good.
even thou its modern it has an old-school feel - that may just be because I've been listing to UK Grime alot recently but I rekon it dus have that old school vibe going on - big L/gangstar etcetc u knw?

you have a very unique voice - despite what ppl on here have said I dont think you sound like eminem or anyone. I duno If I love it yet? its more singy/less bassy than some of the mainstream rappers who would crave your lyrical content. I duno whether I'd prefer you with more 'bite' in your voice, I have only ever heard you like this, just something to consider because I knw you like constructive criticism!

need a good hook - dont fuk it up wid a bad hook, do it justice!

ps whose is the beat?
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Re: Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

Postby DelinQuent » Aug 10th, '08, 09:24

rock a cross but dissed god the night before.... genius lol

loved how the rhymes just rolled out and made complete sense. most people who rhyme as much as you do tend to lose the topic and throw oddball words in just to rhyme. you didnt do that and it made me happy lol.

flow was incredible, i saw sticcy saying it got boring, i felt it wasnt boring at all. flow stayed constant, which is a good thing.

your delivery seemed a little bit bored and keeps me from listening to this more than 3 times. if you sound bored when you spit, im prolly gonna be bored when i listen.

lyrics were top notch. not much else to say on that.

overall, i just wish youd make new stuff :'( lol
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