Verse + Unreleased Freestyle <<<<< Yeah.. really.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i like the lyrics from the verse..sick
freestyle was okay

[mcZu]

Man your flow is crazy
Lyrics are great, delivery is great
This is the first I heard somethinf from you, it's crazy man.
You have some sick rhyme schemes, and that freestyle was insane

[mcZu]

Man your flow is crazy
Lyrics are great, delivery is great
This is the first I heard somethinf from you, it's crazy man.
You have some sick rhyme schemes, and that freestyle was insane

Thanks man ; )


I've had two albums done, I'll see if I can upload some of my newer music.

Thar would be great

[Robbie G]

You've already done two albums?

[Robbie G]

You've already done two albums?

Yeah. I had "Kindergarten Rapper" in 2006, and I had Return Of the Jude in 2005 after my Mixtape "Taste Is Tact" in 04.

were could I find those?

[Tornado]

yo i always wondered how you rapped...it'd be nice to hear the old albums

[randomghost]

hot verse man.. hot flow keep it up

[<Stiiccy>]

flow was good
tho it got fuckin annoying no offence
it was ok

[<Stiiccy>]

flow was good
tho it got fuckin annoying no offence
it was ok

What was annoying (out of curiosity).. I mean, if you have a negative comment please explain.

well it was good man dont get me wrong im not hating on you at all
it was just the fact that the flow was just the same shit goin through the whole thing
idk how to explain it

[Kez]

The verse was just sick
Loved the flow and the "dissed God the night before" line just made me laugh
Beat is sick and quality sounds fine
I loved it basically

[Vettori]

Ur flow is crazy bro haha. I get angry about it, but its a good angry God damn
Second verse wasn't as good as the first but ...The first verse did Kill it.
Now im more anxious to hear some new shit... kept me entertained the whole time. several beers to yu

[Xray]

I'm breath-taking-a-breath, taking a rest,
breaking a back bone bent backwards back to the basements...

sick.

the rhymes I spit are panoramic - across boards,
I rock a cross... but dissed god the night before,

ill.

were like the justice league, minus the justice we-,
mine if we just take a peep at your daughters, pee!
I dont touch boys I dont want a priest to get pissed!
"little keester get with the age of touching kids"

haha shit man that was sick as fuck

lyrics are way above average
flow on the verse wasn't 100% because the lines had very little breath breaks and therefore your flow got forced i think. delivery is cool to.

the freestyle has much better flow because better breathing breaks and lines are sorted out well for the beat

[Mc Cubz]

impressive.
flow is bang on and nice and playfull.
mixing is good.
even thou its modern it has an old-school feel - that may just be because I've been listing to UK Grime alot recently but I rekon it dus have that old school vibe going on - big L/gangstar etcetc u knw?

you have a very unique voice - despite what ppl on here have said I dont think you sound like eminem or anyone. I duno If I love it yet? its more singy/less bassy than some of the mainstream rappers who would crave your lyrical content. I duno whether I'd prefer you with more 'bite' in your voice, I have only ever heard you like this, just something to consider because I knw you like constructive criticism!

need a good hook - dont fuk it up wid a bad hook, do it justice!

ps whose is the beat?

[DelinQuent]

rock a cross but dissed god the night before.... genius lol

loved how the rhymes just rolled out and made complete sense. most people who rhyme as much as you do tend to lose the topic and throw oddball words in just to rhyme. you didnt do that and it made me happy lol.

flow was incredible, i saw sticcy saying it got boring, i felt it wasnt boring at all. flow stayed constant, which is a good thing.

your delivery seemed a little bit bored and keeps me from listening to this more than 3 times. if you sound bored when you spit, im prolly gonna be bored when i listen.

lyrics were top notch. not much else to say on that.

overall, i just wish youd make new stuff lol