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Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 23rd, '09, 04:20

I guess you would call this one of those street singles lol...

this song is from my new album Amerikan Hero..and it's preety damn personal, so enjoy it!

oh BIG PROPS to Tash for mixing this ...he did an incredible job

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man i dont know what to do, im so fuckin lost,
my whole body is gone, i need some noss,
and an ego bigger than rick ross,
self loathing is a trend, and its my fault,
as i look into the mirror, i cant see zach,
im a whole other person, this shits an act,
another persona, takin over im quack,
confidence lacked, my mind is a shake,
insane is a scale, and im at klepto,
so far out, i got condo on neptune,
rip the rep to, no reason to have it,
depressions like a drug, and for me its a habit,
bipolar i am, no sleep for me,
dthousand tylonols, theres still no peak,
seein the grim reaper, when i sleep,
its like a never ending nitemire,
that just wont leave

it just wont free me from this shit im in,
might as well give up, bow down and give in,
a green screen to yall, no one pays me no mind,
im locked in mine, like a jail im confined,
these sparatic thoughts, there eiratic hawks,
that lead ya death, or to a devil fox,
spirtis hittin hard, in my head they knock,
drivin me crazy, bout to twist my head off,
need some medication, maybe then ill be head strong,
prescribe anything, doc make head lost,
between death and this, i dont know how to choose,
one sounds tempting, but i dont wanna fuckin lose,
especially like that, with no one shoot,
gotta go in a blaze, somthin of glory,
maybe then they look back, and some will adore me
or completly uproar me, you faggots will mourn me
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 23rd, '09, 19:33

i agree...incredible job tash..mixing shined on this....
lyrics were nice and pretty decent....one thing i noticed was your pronouncation...especially on "shake"...umm...well...you american so you know better...
flow wasnt as fluid as i would have liked it to be...delievery had the same problem...like your tone went up and down due recording....if you could kept it at a constant level it would sound better...
best for least....HOLY SHIT!! beat was freakin awesome....touching shit...
overall good track...some small flaws in it...i give it an 8.8/10...
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby randomghost » May 23rd, '09, 19:38

damn sticcy....beyone ma expectations..great ass mixing....nice flow...good delivery....good style....nice stuff man...good song....keep them coming :y:
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 23rd, '09, 20:13

thanks guys!
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 23rd, '09, 23:34

Killa wrote:HATE the hook, has a cheesy James Bond kinda style that sucks lol.

Beat is awsome though,Although the lyrics aint esactly complex there nicley put together. Your alot clearer throughout than you are in most songs ive heard. Flow and delivery are nice. I enjoyed this :b:. Makes me look foward to the tape.

thanks for the feed man..and yeh i can understand u hating the hook..lol
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby Xray » May 23rd, '09, 23:46

Sup with the beat? barely can feel the kick or any bass. Wasn't feeling the mixing, felt empty, and the mastering ain't good. Lyrics were nice, concept was alright I liked it. Flow wasn't perfect it was ok, when you started the first verse you were way way off flow, than hopped back on the beat. Delivery was weak, wasn't feeling it. Ok song, doesn't have much replay value for me, but it was OK.
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 23rd, '09, 23:59

thanks for the feed
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby AspirinE » May 24th, '09, 08:06

I like it...

Great beat and hook, lines is on point, and the concept is pretty decent. The thing i can say is that id love to hear flow thats more fluent throughout. But overall very enjoyable.
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby Jay-19 » May 24th, '09, 12:46

I liked this a lot Sticcy!

Love the beat!

The first verse is a hundred times better than the second though. Seems like you wanted a whole other flow on the second verse compared to the first one. Like you rushed a lot of lines in the 2nd, but fuck that. Turned out hot anyways.
Lyrics are solid, could be better, could be worse. You did a good job on it.
Delivery, I see what you were looking for here, and I think it works out well with the vibe of the beat.

So yeah, great track Sticcy! :y:
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby Solace » May 24th, '09, 17:10

Cryptic Wisdom did this beat so much better :shifty:

Good track dude, I always liked this beat. I found it funny when I heard the "sinima beats" thing was like fucked around with so you couldnt really hear it. Liking the lyrics, that Rick Ross line in the beginning of the first verse was a tad "eh..." but it ain't like I can't live with it. Good delivery dude. As Asp said, a fluent flow would make this ace. Keep it up I'm waiting on the album. 8/10
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby DelinQuent » May 24th, '09, 17:35

just did a song with Emadyville from here on this along with another rapper.

mixing is indeed really well done.

first verse has a nice steady flow, loved it. rhyming was decent. lyrics were nice, loved the condo on Neptune line.

2nd verse wasnt a good as the first, but it was still a decent verse. had the same flow, which was good.

overall 7/10, i would have liked to see you do something with the 3rd verse, i also would have liked to see some changes in the flow to make things a bit more interesting. still a great track, i loved it.
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 24th, '09, 20:57

thanks for the feedback guys!!!
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby Slimm » May 24th, '09, 21:09

That beat is fucking amazing man. Like the concept, lyrics are simple but i dont give 2 shits bout that, only felt like it could use a third verse.

dope shit man, looking forward to amerikan hero!
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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 25th, '09, 22:08

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Re: Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

Postby Ka0t1c » May 25th, '09, 22:14

I'm lovin it, i'm stealing it... 8/10 awesome beat, nice feeling :worship:
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