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*New* Audio: JFK & MIKODIN - Nightmares [unfinished]

Postby theJFKshow » Dec 7th, '09, 04:35

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JFK & MIKODIN - Nightmares
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Not finished yet, probably gonna each add another verse. Feedback? Thanks.
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Re: *New* Audio: JFK & MIKODIN - Nightmares [unfinished]

Postby theJFKshow » Dec 7th, '09, 05:40

hey assholes
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Re: *New* Audio: JFK & MIKODIN - Nightmares [unfinished]

Postby gutawafang » Dec 7th, '09, 09:46

Dope motherfucking beat.

Delivery and flow was good. Pronounciation very very good. Volume is balanced. :y:

It's real nice. Especially the chorus. Nice fucking shit, hooked me man. :worship:
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Re: *New* Audio: JFK & MIKODIN - Nightmares [unfinished]

Postby Solace » Dec 8th, '09, 00:37

I love this beat, always had and I love whenever a song using it.

1st verse was pretty damn dope. The flow was nicee, smooth. Delivery was iight. Chorus was pretty good...But seriously the person, whether it was you or Micodin saying all those things in the background behind the singing was pretty annoying...2nd verse the delivery seemed really forced. Flow wasnt bad, but not as nice as 1st person. Didnt enjoy this one as much. Not bad track...keep it up.
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Re: *New* Audio: JFK & MIKODIN - Nightmares [unfinished]

Postby Vettori » Dec 8th, '09, 13:59

seems okay, i remember that beat from years ago haha, im sure i wrote to it..... ur on point with words. but seems like u rushed.. u need to take the time to perfect ur verses.. maybe some more multi's would be nice, and i think the biggest thing is, slowing it down, and express urself more ....

The beat is very loud... so maybe a new beat choice will be nice too, i mean this song probably wont showcase ur skills much, drop another 16 or full song... and try getting "into" it.. i wanna see what yu can do


First guy on the beat had a better flow, second guy held his own still, but as i said maybe a new track, this beat made it wierdd for me, probably because i heard it before lol

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Re: *New* Audio: JFK & MIKODIN - Nightmares [unfinished]

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 8th, '09, 17:44

i liked it ,, :worship: :worship:
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