by Vettori » Dec 8th, '09, 13:59
seems okay, i remember that beat from years ago haha, im sure i wrote to it..... ur on point with words. but seems like u rushed.. u need to take the time to perfect ur verses.. maybe some more multi's would be nice, and i think the biggest thing is, slowing it down, and express urself more ....
The beat is very loud... so maybe a new beat choice will be nice too, i mean this song probably wont showcase ur skills much, drop another 16 or full song... and try getting "into" it.. i wanna see what yu can do
First guy on the beat had a better flow, second guy held his own still, but as i said maybe a new track, this beat made it wierdd for me, probably because i heard it before lol
keep at it