Sajjad ft. Sinima - Remember The Name

[Xray]

This is not an official collab with Sinima, its a track he did and left a second verse free so I did a verse on it, just to challenge myself. Did a new thing with overlays, anyways check the track out and give me feedback if you want it returned it post your link aswell as feed.

You can hate the clouds, but the region is south
I'm leaped to doubt, the reason perpetratin is sound
Bound to leave you frowned, clowned like circus is down town
I'm reachin your crown, an unbelievable scout, how?
I'm deep in your house now, target's locked on your vowels, pow
Screamin, reachin to bail out, but your lungs seem to air out
A suitable kill, yield, when lucifer's will drilled
On four of your foreheads, holes deep in your fought death
Every line I cross it, rarely blind to for-get
My designs from non-sense, can't define my souls wrench
My flows tense, evidence is negligence, like illegal medicines
cause ever since, I been innocent, they've been thinkin I'm foul at events
No sense till I was raised to be cautious
Now they thinkin I've lost it, yet I've never really had it
till these doors lit! and broke
Now I'm focused, a locust in the forest, a foe

http://limelinx.com/files/c8c4047fa7a1e ... 9909f28df7
http://www.zshare.net/audio/7118941321db688c/

Enjoy.

[AliJack]

Lol i feel like im dickridin since every track you do i say is dope as fuck, this one is no different, Sinima soundin like a young tony yayo and shit, and you sound the same way you did on Born Alon Ride Alone, this is really dope shit, flowed like a bitch on PMS, keep droppin bro

[Slice]

i like the way you rhyme in this song, it sounds crazy
the delivery was good, so i can't say something negative in this song

[Edge]

sick song man... i heard that hot 97 reference... ur from ny or sydney?

[AliJack]

sick song man... i heard that hot 97 reference... ur from ny or sydney?

Put another shrimp on the barbie

[gutawafang]

Fucking sick. I'ma download this tomorrow.

[i4ill]

sick for real...
untouchable flow boosted with a sweet delivery. as for the lyricism, I can say, complexity at its finest...damn! I love those crazy multi-syllabic rhymes and multi-internals, you sure put a lot of effort on rhyme scheme, props for that...
My fave part was:

Now they thinkin I've lost it, yet I've never really had it
till these doors lit! and broke
Now I'm focused, a locust in the forest, a foe

clever and dope...

[Arabian Shady]

daym!!!
that overlay shit is dope man
lyrics were HOT!, i digg the flow and meaning yo,
the internal rhymes with THAT flow is a K.O
sick shit homie

[Le Tunisien]

wow really sick damn,sajjad is dope !!!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i remember back when i thought about droppin a verse on it but never did...better that way
yo this was pretty nice man...i felt like the flow was off in one line the innocent line...
rhyming was dope....good see to you droppin from time to time...
lol@ at the hook when he said "It's Sinima *background* and sajjad*
but good verse homie keep at it and drop more

[B.A.D.]

nice one hahaha... sinima isnt as good as I thought he would be, he should stick to producing lmao

your verse is fire, diferent flows in it, daymn, Blitznext style ftw!!, we the only 2 people that do that on our verses, great thang man... the way you did the adlibs was amazing, lot of thought in it, great job, about the mixing, I think reverb in your verse was exagerated lol, and maybe vocals a lil to low, but flow wise, and lyrics wise this is top notch

there was an empty space on the second hook for you to say Sajjad!, cuz sounds funny on the first hook lol...

but great track man

[Magnificent]

AND SAJJAD! ROFL

Dope shit dude, everything on this is top notch!

Kinda cocky though

[Xray]

Wow great feed so far, damn thanks a lot to everyone, really appreciate it. Btw Edge that was Sinima that did the hot 97 reference. I'm from Sydney. As Ali Jack said.

[Tash8]

after listening 3 times.
good thing you put up the lyrics cause i didn't understand a word you said

flow is good, really steady and i dont think you fall off. delivery was good...pronounciation was awful (like possibly you're worst pronounciation ever dude) besides that it was a decent verse.. now everyone's on you're balls about this verse (rightfully so cause i dont think anyone else on this forum can flow like that with the exception of Ax-d) but it was definitely not an overall enjoyable verse...lyrics were dope (you've stepped up you're rhyming recently)

i wasn't feeling the new style of mixing you did though, i think with this track it didn't fit, so i wouldn't just say it's wack mixing, but it's not good with such an open beat

[Xray]

Yep I agree about the mixing, I don't know what to tell you man, my mics been really weird these days. The quality of it has been very different to before and its causing me to take to much time in making new chains of effects, and thats what pissing me off. So thats probably why the mixing is bad on here, because of my mic, might have to buy a different one, I'm sick of it.

As for pronunciation, bullshit you didn't understand a word I said lol. But then again, you probably think that because I'm not American and your probably not used to my Australian accent at times.