.::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

[Tash8]

.::A Lot To Learn::.
Vettori and Tash8
Produced By: Life and Death
Mixed By: Tash

Listen:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8623993
http://www.zshare.net/audio/712684739f075f4d/

Lyrics:
[vettori]
it's Beyond the dissin, On a mission, Till Both of ur arms are missin
Straight to Fear and regret ,An insuperior Mess
You talk ur shit, Go off n spit, not when im Near ur address
Stay clear, We merely want to Hear you confess
i offer 1 option forgot to Stop ur awful in ways
we Lock ur Coffin while ur caughin, ull be caught in a daze
my thumb above you, while ur Subdued and Sqaushed in ur Place
Theres a lot of Simple things That I'm just not gonna face,
Still wonderin when The thunder ends and im popped in my place
Give you the freedom when you need it, Feelin rotten these days
get up and change, When it starts to hurt, hoodies and the darker shirts
I wanna know that it's inside my Heart for sure,
My thoughts are Stopped and Start to stir
a partial Grip But also firm, Theres no price, on good advice,
and I Might have alot to learn,
For everything that's ever gotten worse, Ive never dropped a word
For some things theres not the words, i wont stop till all my Stock has been bought and properly heard
Offer me Courage,ill be off in a hurry
Non stop In a fury, Nobody's Got to be Worried.
-If pac wasn't buried, Thered be alot Hip hop would be cured
alot that neither need to be seen ,or Not to be heard

[chorus-vettori]
you can See why, I Agree not to be fine
a reflection of me, that I don't Want to be mine
Session after session Just offer me time
a Dream come true, It would really mean Alot to be Signed
it would also take alot just to copy my mind
But when it's Nervous, and Nautious Combined
It makes that Hill much more fuckin awful to climb
Drop of a dime,You simply Sold your soul Just to Hop in the Line

[bridge-tash]
you will see why
we soldiers (soldiers)
nothing can hold us (hold us)
days we get older (older)
and you will see why
we're the ones choosen (choosen)

[tash]
the past month or two got the luck a bitch do
only if you knew what the fuck I been through
you'd have known, just how long, it would take to move on
guess it's karma knocking, "knock-knock, who's home
is it you, is it her? "
why'd you have use such harsh and bitter words
not another damn excuse, don't you dare to gimme yours
now before I bite my tongue again, damn I'll learn to speak
and since i'm hooked on vicodin, I've finally learned to sleep
you better fuckin quite then you don't know how i feel
(sigh) there I go again, with my angst I adhere
like a medical disease, I am the epidemy
i've got a lot to learn, a spot on top to earn
but I'm not even concerned cause I will not be burned
and you can see why, i'll be fine in the meantime
untill we're old and senile, then you will see why
I Will Not Lose
Will Will Not Lose
when you think I'm buried that's when I dig out my grave
then I'll grab the pen and turn and burn the fuckin page

[chorus-vettori]
you can See why, I Agree not to be fine
a reflection of me, that I don't Want to be mine
Session after session Just offer me time
a Dream come true, It would really mean Alot to be Signed
it would also take alot just to copy my mind
But when it's Nervous, and Nautious Combined
It makes that Hill much more fuckin awful to climb
Drop of a dime,You simply Sold your soul Just to Hop in the Line

[outro]
yeahh
Vettori
Tash
you know where it's at
CA---get it?
Canada and California muhafucker

thanks a lot guys for the feed

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

this is tr's renegade


dope as fuck tracks guys, tash you really got the flow tight on this, delivery that i know you worked on, really good man.


love the track

[classthe_king]

I love this beat This is when the heartbreak is over right?

Anyway this track is dope as fuck. Mad replay value. Both of you were great. Tash, your great at choruses You actually have a good singing verse

P.S, Life and Death, are you god?

[BabyBLue91]

I actually love this very catchy! Not sure who Vettori is.. but you guys mesh together nice.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I love this beat This is when the heartbreak is over right?

Anyway this track is dope as fuck. Mad replay value. Both of you were great. Tash, your great at choruses You actually have a good singing verse

P.S, Life and Death, are you god?

tash aint on the chorus lol thats vettorri, tash is on the second verse

[Tash8]

this is tr's renegade


dope as fuck tracks guys, tash you really got the flow tight on this, delivery that i know you worked on, really good man.


love the track

hahah TR's renegade, wow that's much appreciated

I love this beat This is when the heartbreak is over right?

Anyway this track is dope as fuck. Mad replay value. Both of you were great. Tash, your great at choruses You actually have a good singing verse

P.S, Life and Death, are you god?

that was vettori on the hook bro ahha but thanks

I actually love this very catchy! Not sure who Vettori is.. but you guys mesh together nice.

wow glad a girl liked this and umm vettori is my mentor, he's "vettori" on tr dunno if you've seen him, but he's the dopest rapper on TR imo.

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only if you guys knew how much we put into this one song, omg just ask vettori, he made me redo my verse about 4 times hahha but it was worth it

[classthe_king]

Haha oh, well your still great at choruses.
Memory Lane=

[B.A.D.]

this is fine track, classy hahaha....
the hook.... tash or vettori?? lol this time I didnt liked it, found it awful, but I dunno.... I mean it was well done but kinda lost the hip hop vibe on there, I didnt liked that feeling, like youre turning into punk or sometin..

vettori had a good flow, good vocals, good rhymes, good delivery, enjoyable, the only thing Im concerned about is that I didnt saw nothing on his verse except words, i didt understood what where you rhyming about. you dont always have to use "flow to impress"... I think it impresses more if it actually comes from your heart

now tash did the song great, the effort is more than clear, the lyrics didnt needed to be complex to be good, you felt the song and some of your lines are deep as a moufou, e.g.: "before I bite my tongue again, damn I'll learn to speak".. thats something I can see on people's facebook status hahaha, a good verse, but on the flow, I dont know what u were trying there but kinda makes it go a bit down, looks easy, buts its not really easy to switch a flow in the middle of the verse, and the echo parts, I was unsure about those.

now this track is a 5 star mafucka right there... good collaboration, i think Tash had the best verse, and about the beat, not my style but its damn good...

sick joint

[Vettori]

"Take a trip down memory Lane " haha tash kills it, Good job man, and thanks to everyone for postin There thoughts. Chorus being differant is what i think makes it more enjoyable...rather then the simple 2 words and repeat....I like when it's a little bit more complex, Plus it helps me get better for future songs... I wanna work on my vocals More, Thanks for the feedback

[Emadyville]

Easily the best song I've heard on TR

Vettori, lyrics, rhymes, flow, delivery, hook, all sick. I really have nothing else to say, you killed it

Tash, complimented Vettoris verse great cause you were slightly slower with a little more melody at time, rhymes, flow, delivery, all great.

Beat was great, everything on this was amazing


great job guys

[Tash8]

this is fine track, classy hahaha....
the hook.... tash or vettori?? lol this time I didnt liked it, found it awful, but I dunno.... I mean it was well done but kinda lost the hip hop vibe on there, I didnt liked that feeling, like youre turning into punk or sometin..

vettori had a good flow, good vocals, good rhymes, good delivery, enjoyable, the only thing Im concerned about is that I didnt saw nothing on his verse except words, i didt understood what where you rhyming about. you dont always have to use "flow to impress"... I think it impresses more if it actually comes from your heart

now tash did the song great, the effort is more than clear, the lyrics didnt needed to be complex to be good, you felt the song and some of your lines are deep as a moufou, e.g.: "before I bite my tongue again, damn I'll learn to speak".. thats something I can see on people's facebook status hahaha, a good verse, but on the flow, I dont know what u were trying there but kinda makes it go a bit down, looks easy, buts its not really easy to switch a flow in the middle of the verse, and the echo parts, I was unsure about those.

now this track is a 5 star mafucka right there... good collaboration, i think Tash had the best verse, and about the beat, not my style but its damn good...

sick joint

wow! that's awesome feedback... one thing i was a bit disappointed you said though is that the vettori chorus didn't really have a hip hop feel to it, cause i mean ax, you know this best, you love to experiment with choruses and that's kinda what we were doing here, but imo it's still hip hop..anyways taht's damn good feed thanks bro!

Easily the best song I've heard on TR

Vettori, lyrics, rhymes, flow, delivery, hook, all sick. I really have nothing else to say, you killed it

Tash, complimented Vettoris verse great cause you were slightly slower with a little more melody at time, rhymes, flow, delivery, all great.

Beat was great, everything on this was amazing


great job guys

thanks man, means a lot! thx for u help too

[Mr. Chambers]

ok...

vett..i'ma keep it real......when i was listening...you sound just like eminem.....like it was liek listening to eminem....that was not a good thing......i mean i know everyone has their own thing....but like big ax said...i felt you was just flowing to impress.......this is one of those songs where you shoulda focused more on the content then how many multi's you could cram in there

i actually enjoyed the hook...i don't think it really fit into the song with the delivery you previously brought vet but still enjoyable...

tash....i already gave you my feedback on msn..so i ain't gonna re-type it....

not a bad track fella's...

[Vettori]

thanks for checkin......HmmmI don't understand how i sound like em....ever lol, i mean im from canada, he's from the states so our accents may be very similar, but the styles definatly differant...as for content i Was putting the content in, but as well trying to make it rhyme and enjoyable to follow along.The content is more for me, it's like tellin myself ive got room for improvement.Like a memo Pad or some shit Tells you things And reminds you....songs are the same for me. i like to express them mainly for myself, But It's great to have it critiqued .that's the art of it.. Bringing something new to the table...and if anything, eminem Sounds like me bro LMAO......... He aint sing till his recent choruses... I been doin it alot longer.. well it's not really singin more of trying to make it sound enjoyable, and not so plain....I use up the space im givin.. not a fan of simplicity....My style consists of word placement...It's what makes a song catchy and interesting.... so i dont feel that because i try to Put the extra effort in that it's imitating a style or anything of someone who may do Somethin similar... Not gonna lie...a fan of the guy myself. But enough people have told me the comparison is A ways apart. Sometimes In cases like this i wish i was a differant Ethnicity...Cause if i rapped the same, it wouldnt be the case LMAO....No hate tho Just sayin it for those who are thinkin hard on it

again thanks to those who left feedback..Definatly appreciated.

and Even i got alot to learn , im still gettin better.. Might take time but Im confident my songs can be great one day. What's life without a dream.

[Mr. Chambers]

woooo bro......way too much typing for a responce to critique.......

i just ment your delivery sounded like him..and reguardless of what you or anyone says...if you sound like some1 you gonna get a hard time...especially eminem.........i didn't mean the way your rhyme schemes were set up....cuz i know theres more into an MC then what his/her delivery puts out...but like....asher roth sounds like eminem....why?..cuz his delivery is the same.....thats all i'm trying to say..

as far as the whole multi thing....well....yea...thats cool...thats your thing....but sometimes focussing on finding words to rhyme together take away or scramble the actual meaning of the song..its happened to me sometimes....and if you keep this style...it'll happen to you too......if your going to keep a style like this...try cutting back on your syllables that rhyme between your bars....or try using like one word rhymes in the middle that are different then your multi's at the end of bars....cuz yea..your flow was on lock...but imo...it kinda scrambled up the message of the song.....

i dunno..thats just my opinion..and only you can decide what works for you...all this is just stepping stones...

[Tash8]

ok...

vett..i'ma keep it real......when i was listening...you sound just like eminem.....like it was liek listening to eminem....that was not a good thing......i mean i know everyone has their own thing....but like big ax said...i felt you was just flowing to impress.......this is one of those songs where you shoulda focused more on the content then how many multi's you could cram in there

i actually enjoyed the hook...i don't think it really fit into the song with the delivery you previously brought vet but still enjoyable...

tash....i already gave you my feedback on msn..so i ain't gonna re-type it....

not a bad track fella's...

thanks again chambers