Successful Ft. Trey Songs

[Mr. Chambers]

http://usershare.net/mx9dyps79izt

http://www.zshare.net/audio/7126665187e94d55/

they keep telling me i need to be signed//
that i need to comply...prolly need to rewind//
also needin a spine...and need to supply//
but what i need and what you fuckin want need not apply//
cuz what i need for life people will never see//
looking for good with nothin but evil ahead of me//
never cease to amaze....i'ma soldier...a man//
say shit'll improve...lady luck holdin my hand//
the ace of spades...king of heart...colder then planned//
so when life throws me flushes i ain't foldin my hand//
place a deadlines..no...i hate the rules of demand//
world on my back...dunno if i sholder the stand//
dam....guess i'ma just have to adjust//
feels like i'm going places...but ain't travelin much//
fuck beef....no point to even battle these fucks//
who get laughs off calling me an asshole and such//

dunno why i let that rattle me up//
when all i do is smash them into gravel and dust//
fuck....many would say that i'm living the life//
tell me i'm living comfortably...given the times//
i'ma foundation of truth...in a city of lies//
telling me to sell out...i'll say shitty advice//
give me rhymes...my girl...and a salary cap//
and i'll be good with where my realities at//
cuz whats the good in money..cars and clothes//
if you can't walk down streets without stars and hoes//
all kissing your ass....always gassin your tank//
complete fucking strangers asking for thanks//
ok.....thanks you for not supporting my tracks//
thanks for hate...and thanks for restoring my raps//
if only i had a dollar and a dream//
instead of all this common sense and nightmares that are following me//

i'ma diamond in the rough....and i'm sweatin to much//
there isn't a tool large enough to measure the cut//
but it seems that with the more pressure that comes//
comes more effort for buzz....when my records are spun//
son...if only you knew the struggles of shit//
then you'd understand why i'm hell bent hustling this//
cuz i live in the hood....not saying for show//
i'm saying this cuz its hard to stay in the flow//
in a world of shoot first i feel no connection//
cuz i hate the drama...and i have no protection//
sooooo...being successful is half the problem//
and the issues are huge...so i have to solve em//
call em what you wants....take em for worthless//
but its the solutions thats makin a person//
ask me if i want success...yea...i guess so//
i'm only human.....and we all wanna be successful//

i'm coming for 2010.....

[Solace]

Loving the laidback feeling and flow and ya lyrics were dope. Smooth multies. Cant wait for the mixtape. Dope verses. Keep at it TC.

[Tash8]

before i listened to this track, i downloaded it.. i just knew i was gonna like this track

anyways, i dont want to go ahead and tell ur flow is dope and delivery is awesome (love the laidback, though i can see ppl saying it's repetitive but i loved it) anyways, instead of doing that i decided i'm just gonna listen to it a few times nad tell you what stands out to me (the good vs the bad)

the good:
but what i need and what you fuckin want need not apply//
---woowoww i just love the need not apply, it's just dope imo

the ace of spades...king of heart...colder then planned//
so when life throws me flushes i ain't foldin my hand//
---great meta man

ask me if i want success...yea...i guess so//
i'm only human.....and we all wanna be successful//
--perfect ending, i loved it bro, liked when u stopped to make an emphasis

problem:
if only i had a dollar and a dream
--- Your pronounciation on this is just awful.

good song bro, keep at it.

[classthe_king]

Loved this track.Your rhyming is great. Flow never faulters. I can't wait for your album.

[B.A.D.]

yo Tom
can u zshare this for me, cuz usershare crashes on me idk why lol

thx

[Mr. Chambers]

yea my bad i forgot to add it

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

liked your lyrics and the way you spat it man.


beat ruined it for me though, far to empty imo. witch sucks coz i liked the lyircs and content, someone remix this shit!

[Mr. Chambers]

^yo bar...tbh...i felt the same way when i first heard the beat...i was like...dam...this beat sucks i could make this on FL studio in 10 minutes.....but let it grow.....honest...in a week i was like...dam i could do some real dark shit on this...
but good looks on listening...

[B.A.D.]

I actually like the beat, plus I think it fits the style perfectly
nice flow, calm and real... i like it

definitively a fan of this track, except the end with trey, the beat like crunches or somethin in, doesnt sound good lol

but I like the calm vibe to it, plus the lyrics are really interesting... many quotables
good track man

oh, and great audio quality

[Vettori]

like axe said alot of quotables, u sound bored or stoned haha but the funny thing is ur good. so like the flows there, but the drive isn't maybe the beat choice made u choose to do it like that. But woulda been nice with a bit more energy....Not gonna lie ive always hated the original.. and im not a big fan of drake/Trey songs.. you made it interesting none the less..I think bar said something about if it was on a differant beat it would be dope

i agree alotta the lines you had were great and would have sounded sick if you used them on another beat....when u make a song and the lyrics are tight...try hard to make sure the beat Can help you showcase the strength of it. this beat was...lazy on the production side.

Cool shit man, Hope to hear a hit soon, Cause ur someone id expect to be able to do so. Work on ur delivery more

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

as vet said you sound bored or stoned...not feelin the delivery here..
but lyrics were A+ ...really liked them
flow was on spot but nuttin amzing tho ... and i thought the beat matched the vibe you was goin for..
just a little more emotion and you set

[Le Tunisien]

wow ,i really like this track..theres like a relaxing feel to it ^^
lyrics were dope too,flow was flawless,
keep up the nice work tom

[Tash8]

yo chambers i really dont think you sound bored at all, if you guys listen to the original as well with drake, he sounds similar and his was being played on the radio...

[Mr. Chambers]

i was aiming for laid back.....but i've been hearing i sounded "bored" alot.....so i dunno...i personally like it...but i might re-record it and see if i can make it sound more "hype" without fucking up the vibe...thats right i made it rhyme

[Mr. Chambers]

upsy daisy