best poem i ever wrote :P

by **d3vilgirl** » Jan 25th, '06, 23:41

Night falls over the quiet city
As tears on my face, such a pity
I hear screams in my mind
Death... that is what i want to find.

Trying in vain to delete the pain
Runing to catch the midnight train.
Ideas of death coming to mind
Falling asleep without no fight.

Children playing in the park
Anoying sounds of happynes are leaving a mark
In my dark soul and mind
The light is making me blind.

doesn't make much sense

but i like it...

by **d3vilgirl** » Jan 26th, '06, 00:12

yeah i am... and evil 2

i love the way i am

and thanks :P

by **Ivy** » Jan 26th, '06, 00:36

Ahmmmmmmm

"She is whatever you say she is"

^^^above is the reversed quote from the chorus of "Way I Am"^^^

by **SNaKe** » Jan 26th, '06, 01:09

d3vilgirl wrote:Night falls over the quiet city
As tears on my face, such a pity
I hear screams in my mind
Death... that is what i want to find.

Trying in vain to delete the pain
Runing to catch the midnight train.
Ideas of death coming to mind
Falling asleep without no fight.

Children playing in the park
Anoying sounds of happynes are leaving a mark
In my dark soul and mind
The light is making me blind.

doesn't make much sense but i like it...

really nice, im also more into darker stuff..... :twisted:

but people know that here.....

by **Rap Soul** » Jan 26th, '06, 02:37

d3vilgirl wrote:yeah i am... and evil 2 i love the way i am and thanks :P

is it true that dark people have some of the craziest sex ever.

by **Ivy** » Jan 26th, '06, 02:49

Rap Soul wrote:
d3vilgirl wrote:yeah i am... and evil 2 i love the way i am and thanks :P
is it true that dark people have some of the craziest sex ever.

I'd expect that out of a guy....and it depends on how "dark" you are....the answer is yes and no....it can go both ways.....

by **d3vilgirl** » Jan 26th, '06, 11:06

yeah... taylor is right... it depends.. but anyway... i'm not always dark... i have happy days 2

they are pretty rare... but they exist

by **AspirinE** » Jan 26th, '06, 11:09

very nice poem!

by **em16** » Jan 26th, '06, 11:56

nice poem.. i like them dark ones.. but i really like your poem..

by **d3vilgirl** » Jan 26th, '06, 12:25

yeeey

and i thought no one would like it

thanks

by **Ka0t1c** » Jan 26th, '06, 19:47

i say that i think you're starting to understand yourself a lot better to build upon your "true character"

by **Rae** » Feb 13th, '06, 02:22

i like that "dark" stuff 2! thats how i right my poems. they have ALOT more imagination in them. *i think* good job

best poem i ever wrote :P

best poem i ever wrote :P

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