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[slimsoxshady]

Since my computer got fried, i've been finding a lot of my songs on random CD the past few weeks. Don't think I ever posted this one on here so I wanna just add this to the TR collection. This song has one of my fav hooks. Check it out and drop a word u'd like.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/71294343addd233b/

[Tash8]

wow this is actually good, besides the shitty ass beat...which u picked a diff beat cause this was pretty good.. flow is good delivery is awesome

[Strictt Ame]

Beats on point, hooks pretty catchy..flows good for the most part..mixing needs work, tone down the vocal panning..main vocals should stay in the middle, backups and adlibs panned..makes it sound real echoey and throws the flow off cuz your two vocal tracks dont match up 100% which ok but panning them brings out the mismatch..

Overall its a straight track..keep it up

[mcZu]

Agree with what was said, your voice has potential. You just need to find the right delivery that fits you.

[slimsoxshady]

thanx for taking the time to listen guys...feeds are appreciated. I agree with the panning comment but with bigger sounding beats, my voice doesn't really stand out in the middle and I gotta do multiple layers and pan them around. Just something i've found from experimenting.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

was the start supposed to sound like chammilionaire riding dirty ?


beat ruins the track, you sound like you got skills spitting but, would like to hear more

[slimsoxshady]

was the start supposed to sound like chammilionaire riding dirty ?


beat ruins the track, you sound like you got skills spitting but, would like to hear more

I listen to a lot of Chamillionaire so it probly influenced me lol
Thanx for taking the time to listen, I'll post some new songs soon. I'm just getting back to recording again after a long break.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

was the start supposed to sound like chammilionaire riding dirty ?


beat ruins the track, you sound like you got skills spitting but, would like to hear more

I listen to a lot of Chamillionaire so it probly influenced me lol
Thanx for taking the time to listen, I'll post some new songs soon. I'm just getting back to recording again after a long break.

yeh, can be a little rusty getting back in, did that a while back but im better for it, taking a break away gives you more time to get your style into percpective i think

[Brownwall]

The concept doesn't really appeal to me, but still, as a song its dope. I definitely like the second verse better though, seemed more intelligible.

[Vettori]

The ending of the beat sounded sick... haha it started sounding good there, as for ur Chorus..I liked it to a degree....How old are you...U have a lighter Voice...and i feel as u get older and ur voice defines more..You could have sumthing....I had this problem for a while..and it might not be the case with yu..I listen to any of my old stuff...the voice it what puts me off

I am 21 now..and the voice thing aint a big problem... other then that ur lyrics were actually cool, u kept it bumpin. hmmm beat was okay.....again not a huge fan of it..but u did good on it.. and made it enjoyable...Verses you shined... some un xpected rhymes came up, and I just smiled for how u said some things... was nice... Plus ur already at a point where yur expression shows well..U made sure ur voice dominated... and the beat didnt carry yu ..

Good track some replay value...It makes me wanna hear more of ur other songs.

Hope u blossom from here man, Just focus on being better, and before you know it...U'll be droppin 16 bars with ease....and everything comming to you naturally

[slimsoxshady]

^ thanx for the long feed man...I'm actually 21 also so i doubt the voice is gonna change much lol