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::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

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::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 21st, '10, 05:28

Tittle : Look In My Eyes
Artists: Redzek & Big Ax-D

Producer:GiD
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Zshare Link : http://www.zshare.net/audio/71479858a3d5021b/
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Lyrics:

[Verse 1 : RedZek]

its like im housebound trapped between 4 walls
no where 2 run 2 no way 2 Hide and crawl
im just caged up in this atmosphere
like my life has stopped i wanna dissappear
cuz i fear my soul,cant feel my skin
i wanna let it go, cant deal with a sin
cant take my grief,i believe i cant breath
cant have a belief,man i just wanna leave
face the demons that have taken over my soul
dark sins inside me jus dont seem to Go
my vain rush blood with the pain that it cause
cuz my family aint proud,no wonder they wont applause
...but untill then, i feel its hard to control
its like a game glitch from a fucking console
it wont stop,its there all the fukin time
man i want it to end so i can be sublime

[Hook : Big Ax-D ]

if you could take a little look in my eyes
and see the monster that I have inside... its like I, just dont want it outta me
why the... why - why the fuck do I have to
deal with this, feel the pain within, every moment now that im feeling
sober.... am I really?, no, im only... only tryna feel the moment

[Verse 2: Big Ax-D ]

(Bridge)

its just violence, deep in my own mind
too much silence, I need to hear the ambulance sirens
circling sirens

but let me just go back to life and put a focus on my might
to be the rapper that I try to be, but I cant relate like
any of you muthafuckaz who are oposite of mine
toss a coin and loose the flip, I still properly desire
to be the nigga you admire, but why Im still wired
to this muthafuckin cables, let me go now... bye bye
electroshock comes!!! WHZZZOOOOM!!, I LIKE!!!
its so wrong I know it mom, put the plumb bomb in my bun
bombin till its done on the tongue of rolling stones, hum
Im I giggling?? it feels sweet, drilling my brain
you think Im kiddin man, fuck you, lets finish it then
nigga this shit is my dream
they see that Big is a king

[Hook : Big Ax-D ]

if you could take a little look in my eyes
and see the monster that I have inside... its like I, just dont want it outta me
why the... why - why the fuck I have to
deal with this, feel the pain within, every moment now that im feeling
sober.... am I really?, no, im only... only tryna feel the moment

[Verse 3: RedZek ]

U dream those dreams,U'v seen these screens,
it bleeds it seems,cuz i hear "please" screams
on me you can lean,i'v been on tossed scences
My Life is Like a Queen,Whos Lost In Between
Cant You See what i mean?its just fair to lie
i stare at your eye...so prepare to die!
try lookin at the sky,and ask God Why
while pussy i smoke u ,your ass got high
hide,u push to me choke you?,i'll make u Slut Cry
u Would Pray For ur Life,cuz ill stay with this knife
inspite,its not right,its a fight,so Play Quite
my life is like a lyric,i know you may bite
i shine when i spit it,you know i spray light,
you might become blind,its not nice for ur eyes
ice and fire combined,its hot to just slice twice
My Music,you refuse it?you'r stupid n confused!

[Hook : Big Ax-D ]

if you could take a little look in my eyes
and see the monster that I have inside... its like I, just dont want it outta me
why the... why - why the fuck I have to
deal with this, feel the pain within, every moment now that im feeling
sober.... am I really?, no, im only... only tryna feel the moment !
Last edited by Le Tunisien on Jan 21st, '10, 05:41, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: ::::REDZEK & BIG AX-D - LOOK IN MY EYES::::

Postby Tash8 » Jan 21st, '10, 05:39

hook is awesome, everything ax u did on this track was dope..just dope

redzek, ur fisrt verse had a flow i kinda like the singy song thin u did. overall you did good, still ain't feelin ur quality..liked the ending to ur third verse.. but yeah not a bad job

ax u spazzed on this track man.
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Re: ::::REDZEK & BIG AX-D - LOOK IN MY EYES::::

Postby Most-Hated » Jan 21st, '10, 05:57

Great drop AX the hook on this is incredible...One of the best that I have heard on here for real...haha

Ax your verse is as always simple in yet effectfull really enjoyable and playful at times...

really liked this one guys good job :y:
she takes me on a journey, to a place called hell,
she showed where she stays, she show me where she dwells,
theres an errie saddness, commin from the room,
its as if its a funeral, but were all doomed,
death all around, but i feel more comfort,
blood rained skies, you could say im covered,
the feelin from her, is like no other
dont wanna say it, but the demon i love her
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Re: ::::REDZEK & BIG AX-D - LOOK IN MY EYES::::

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 21st, '10, 06:03

ur flow is a bit off but it was ok you just have to get more emotion into the song

big ax-d your shit was good especially the chorus
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Re: ::::REDZEK & BIG AX-D - LOOK IN MY EYES::::

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jan 21st, '10, 06:16

big ax....we need a track together...on da real.....hook was....off the fucking chain...loved that shit....and the flow on your verse......fucking beautiful......lyrics were good.....delivery was nice...shit was dope

redzek...tbh...you dragged the song down.... :unsure: ...i think you shoulda put ax on the last verse cuz after he killed the 2nd verse....it was just impossible to keep up in the 3rd verse.......your flow wasn't bad...but it wasn't anything special either......lyrics were alright......delivery was boring....and your quality....is just yuck.......
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Re: ::::REDZEK & BIG AX-D - LOOK IN MY EYES::::

Postby gutawafang » Jan 21st, '10, 07:17

I'ma downlaod it. It's fucking hot man. I like the hook of course. Well, I like the verses too.

Awesome man. :worship:
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Re: ::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 21st, '10, 15:58

Thanks for all who feeded,appreciated :) keep feeding :shifty:
and hey tom u still creepin ? :shakehead: :D :p
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Re: ::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jan 21st, '10, 16:07

omg ax you nailed the hook :worship: real nice one...
didnt like when you rushed your flow in the beginning of your verse..the lil bridge into the verse was kool but then you kind of switches 360 and rushed it..no smooth transition to the fast part..maybe that could help... :worship: but the hook was damn nice
tuna...umm yeah what tash said...
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Re: ::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 21st, '10, 16:30

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

thanks to everyone a lot, thanks for the comments, I grealy appreciate them
i think this is the hook that I am most proud of...

thanks to redzek for inviting me to this track :y:
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Re: ::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

Postby Brownwall » Jan 21st, '10, 22:00

Like everyone said, the hook was sick. The track overall was pretty dope. Lyrically, it wasn't amazing, but, even though I might be a little biased against your accents, the deliveries were proper. Also, the flows could've used a little tweaking. Redzek's quality brought things down a bit, but that can't be helped for now, I guess. Overall, a nice collab.
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Re: ::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 21st, '10, 23:49

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:omg ax you nailed the hook :worship: real nice one...
didnt like when you rushed your flow in the beginning of your verse..the lil bridge into the verse was kool but then you kind of switches 360 and rushed it..no smooth transition to the fast part..maybe that could help... :worship: but the hook was damn nice
tuna...umm yeah what tash said...

hell yeah he did :p i love the hook too :smoking: and thx i guess
Big Ax-D wrote::worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

thanks to everyone a lot, thanks for the comments, I grealy appreciate them
i think this is the hook that I am most proud of...

thanks to redzek for inviting me to this track :y:

np =P i think im the one who is supposed to thank you for getting on my track :p :b: :b: :b:
Brownwall wrote:like everyone said the hook was sickk. the track overall was pretty dope.
lyrically it wasn't amazing, but, even tho i might be a little biased against ur accents, the deliveries were proper. also, the flows cud've used a little tweaking.
redzek's quality brought things down a bit, but tht can't be helped for now, i guess.
overall good track. nice collab.

hmm its true about the quality,and thanks for feeding,nice collab worrrrd :p :p :smoking:
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Re: ::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 22nd, '10, 05:01

hahaha thanks for that man :worship: :worship: :worship:

see, something good comes out of beefing hahaha :y: :worship: :flower:
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Postby B.A.D. » Jan 22nd, '10, 12:12

bizump :y:
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Re: ::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 22nd, '10, 15:33

Menzo wrote:Ax-D fuckin murdered the hook :worship: :worship: :b: :b: Redzek, I thought your second verse was pretty dope, and I liked the vibe of your first one too :smoking: Awesome song guys.

Seems like yesterday you two were beefing :flutter: aha

haha yeah,thanks alot man :p :p
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Re: ::::Redzek & Big Ax-D - Look In My Eyes::::

Postby Spyder » Jan 22nd, '10, 20:01

i thought i fed this but i guess i was dreaming :o

anyhow, Tuni your pronouciation is a lot better sense the last time i heard you good job
the flow was nice, delivery was a little wierd for me but not bad at all.
lyrics were decent, not the best ive seen from you but deff not the worst :sweating:

Ax-D - lving this man. the Hook was tight as usual with you singing :y:
love the bridge into your verse, lyrics were dope and the deilvery and flow on this was raw man
great shit

quality was good likde the beat

dope track

never thought id see you two collab :whistle:
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