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Postby MuNxMuN » Jan 25th, '06, 03:14

wow that was really good. sometimes i feel like that towards my mom but like you said she is my mom. keep writing poetry you're good at it :flower:
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Re: Another poem from yours TruLy ;)

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Postby AspirinE » Jan 25th, '06, 11:21

How could u wish death opon ur mom :(

Eminem has really been a bad example for you.


But good poem, has feeling :smoking:
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Postby AspirinE » Jan 26th, '06, 10:15

TruEmFan wrote:
AspirinE wrote:
Eminem has really been a bad example for you.


LOL.

hey, i put an author's note there, ya know... :p

but yeah, i honestly falt this at a time. maybe even more than once. i went through some real bad shit with my family. i mean, it was REALLY bad. i didn't even talk to my family for a straight year. (and by family, i mean the people that i lived with) and they didn't talk to me either. i would come home from school and not even acknowledge them. and it was vice versa. they didn't want anything to do with me, and i returned the feeling.

and on the rare occasions that i did talk to them... it would all just end up with my mom yelling at me. i swear, this would just seem like a normal argument between mother and daughter, but this shit breaks you down. every time she would speak, all i i could hear was "you're not good enough. you're worthless" and just all this shit that no child needs to hear.

so while she was screaming at me one night, i just sat there and concentrated on this piece of paper, just letting everything i was feeling out, just like she was.

my mom and i are very alike... we clash SO MUCH and we're both so fucking stubborn...

but i love her and she loves me. we both know that.

hah, this is some corny ass shit, but i felt like typing that up.

and btw... i never saw waterboy :(


Not that u might care wat i tell u but, i have been through it with my father, coz i was mad he left my mother , and she died alone, I argued with him all the time, but i dont think i could wish death upon him, once u see wat death is u think of it differently :(
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Postby AspirinE » Jan 26th, '06, 10:44

Sarah wrote:I don't think I could wish death upon anyone. Thats just horrible..

and they say eminem doesnt influence people, i think em is an idiot for wishing death upon relatives..... its pure ignorance, no matter how bad they treat u cant say something that bad to them, and he did it in a video clip .. dayme
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Postby Nick419 » Jan 27th, '06, 01:57

this is like Em and Kim ,writes a song that wishes death then later its all cool :8) .......but anyways it was a great poem , had alot of emotion
RIP Big proof~Broken hearted, my soul's like a open target
And I'm ready to leave Earth
You step to my death next year on my T-shirt
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Postby Ivy » Jan 27th, '06, 02:38

There's so much dramatic emotions flowing through this site all at once, I need to be put on Zoloft to keep them under control :'( Just Playin' :smoking:
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby chronic » Jan 27th, '06, 02:45

...(crying)


well thats an..(unsure)..an...very emotical poem... :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(


...i mean..u.uuuu...h....it was very ....sensitive...ya...nice..u really used to gate ya mom....dam.....
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Postby Ivy » Jan 27th, '06, 02:56

TruEmFan wrote:yeah, i did...

but we're good now. i love my mom.

i mean... she's my mom! how can i hate end up hating her?

i did at the time... and i probably will feel like that a few more other times, but overall...

we love each other. she and i both know that.



Oh.....* :shifty: grabs tissue box* That's so sweet, like a movie on lifetime, the ending is always expected....
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Postby Ivy » Jan 27th, '06, 03:10

TruEmFan wrote:
taylorakatiggi wrote:Oh.....* :shifty: grabs tissue box* That's so sweet, like a movie on lifetime, the ending is always expected....


yeah, corny shit right there :zipped:



Are you calling my shit corny :confusion: I'm going to cry now :'( ....j/p....Glad you and your mother made up....
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Postby Ivy » Jan 27th, '06, 03:14

TruEmFan wrote:nah, i was agreeing with you about MY shit being corny. lol


Oh okay :D , but I wasn't implying that your shit was corny, just that your ending played out like a movie on lifetime...
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Postby Ivy » Jan 27th, '06, 03:26

TruEmFan wrote:but movies on lifetime are corny :unsure:

:D



Not all of them :tounge2:
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Postby Ivy » Jan 27th, '06, 03:35

I'm not ashamed of it, :shifty: *looks to make sure nobody's around* :shifty:
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Postby Nick419 » Jan 27th, '06, 03:54

shut up about life time (my mom watches it all the time.) also i know a guy who watches it more than my mom! when they have on like how do i say it? aaaaaaaaa woman shows on there yeah thats the word woman!
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