2sDay vs shadyfreakzul *VOTE NOW!!!!!!*

[2sDay]

6 lines, house rules

ok i'll drop later....

[Spyder]

did u call him out

[shadyfreakzul]

did u call him out

yes he did.

[2sDay]

Here it is:

Better get those pills, before you get the "ghost" chills,
Your just a zebra to a lion, I hold the record for most kills,

Your still nineteen, but where have those good lines been?,
Or where's your mind hidin', believe me son, it's a sin,

To suck as much as you at your old age, so at this told stage,
Put the mic down, don't fight now, just go get your minimum wage,

Bar 1: "ghost" as in ghostwriters too cause he's gettin' scared he's gonna get caught/zebra to a lion cause he lives in africa(no rasicm at ALL)just a metaphor.

Bar 2: He's nineteen and not as good as he should be.....

Bar 3: Same as Bar 2....me telling him to give up cause he'll never blow.....

[shadyfreakzul]

Ok here's mine

'2sGay' lets get serious, like taekwando you lack punches
your lines weak,my rhymes ill, kids retreat when my attack launches
you and smithy sound wack like stunting like my daddy
and fuck a rap battle, i'll just command a soldier in my army(miami)
so call a counselor cuz my lyrics leave you low esteemed like you mad at your dick(size)
while my similes leave your stunned like the cat in your pic.



line1: for those who dont know taekwando is a martial that mainly involves the use of legs.
line3: i meant the birdman and lil wayne track
line4:his status is soldier and he lives in miami
line6:look at his pic i'm stunning him like that lol

[Strictt Ame]

Not a great battle but it was close..2s you couldve used a bit more substance other than his age and how he should be nicer by now..Freakzul you had some good concepts but your wording was off, your punches didnt connect like they couldve..


(3) Punchlines- Freakzul
(3) Personals- 2sDay
(2) Multies- Tie
(1) Flow- 2sDay
(1) Structure- Tie
(1) Vocab/Complex: Freakzul
(1) Other: Freakzul

5-4 in Freakzul's favor..again close battle but I think he edged it here..keep at it

[shadyfreakzul]

thanks for the advice strictt but dont really agree on multies.anyway 1-0 for me.

[2sDay]

thanks for the advice strictt but dont really agree on multies.anyway 1-0 for me.

neither do i agree on the multies.....
i had more....but it's kool 1-0

[shadyfreakzul]

can someone please vote?

[AliJack]

(3) Punchlines- Freakzul
(3) Personals- 2sDay
(2) Multies- Freakzul
(1) Flow- 2sDay
(1) Structure- 2sDay
(1) Vocab/Complex: Freakzul
(1) Other: 2sDay

its a tie in votes...but imo, I liked Freakzul's piece for the punches.. so you take my vote freakzul. no hard feelins 2sDay

[shadyfreakzul]

ok 2-0 for me.

[gutawafang]

3) Punchlines- Tuesday
(3) Personals- Freak
(2) Multies- Tuesday
(1) Flow- Draw
(1) Structure- Tuesday
(1) Vocab:- Tuesday
(1) Other: Wordplay goes to Freak

7-2.

I vote 2sday.

[shadyfreakzul]

3) Punchlines- Tuesday
(3) Personals- Freak
(2) Multies- Tuesday
(1) Flow- Draw
(1) Structure- Tuesday
(1) Vocab:- Tuesday
(1) Other: Wordplay goes to Freak

7-2.

I vote 2sday.

it should have been 7-4 according to your breakdown.but am a lil bit confused on punchlines. any way 2-1

[2sDay]

bump

[Element.]

3) Punchlines- Tuesday
(3) Personals- Freak
(2) Multies- Tuesday
(1) Flow- Draw
(1) Structure- Tuesday
(1) Vocab:- Tuesday
(1) Other: Wordplay goes to Freak

7-2.

I vote 2sday.

I agree with you