NEW STEVE SPAG - Crowded Remix

[Steve Spag]

Well, it's not really my song, it's Dana Menard's and I got the 3rd verse.
Be sure to check it out and let me know what you think, whether positive or negative.
We recorded this a couple hours ago....note, for those interested, i also got 4 tracks done for my next mixtape, so it IS on the way!

Steve Spag ft. Dana Menard - Crowded.mp3 - 2.91MB

Lyrics:
think you'll outsmart me bitch? i know what you're thinking
every weekend drinkin' with the guys, you're soo decievin'
i mean it, hoe i'm leaving, you're dealing with cold feelings
i'll throw you in detox for feindin' my gold penis
i'm hot and steaming, why can't you just all see it?
the genie is out the bottle and healing my old demons
so why the fuck should i let you come in creeping?
corruption is your lover, your heart must be soo weakened
to do this, why can't you adjust to the sequence
that's moving? you must have not heard of the secret
i'm usin', what's the point in teachin' beliefs
of the humans when it's obvious that we won't agree? huh?
now me in your world, it just won't work out
so we are through girl, i'll take a new route
and when you hear this, please don't write back
you ain't near missed and i won't ever like ya'

Please Leave Feedback!

[Spyder]

wasnt feelin her singing


verse was dope, good flow and prety good delivery. pronounciation is getting alot better
lyrics are tight and everything

good little verse

[Requiem]

not bad man, ur pronunciation is defnly getting better. Your flow is solid and there are no obvious fall offs. great job man

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feedback guys, glad you were feeling my part at least!

Keep the feed coming!

[Solace]

Damnn this is a TIGHT fucking beat.

Your verse was tiiight. Started off weak imo but went straight to dopeness...Main thing that shined was your flow in this and how it accompanied the beat so well. Keep it up...im waitin for your drop whether im ready or not

[Dark Blue]

love the beat on this and i think u and her both did a great job on it im downloading it now to lol

[BabyBLue91]

Damnn this is a TIGHT fucking beat.

& Also, I loved your verse on it more than her parts lol. Really enjoyed it! Makes me wanna hear more of you

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks beautiful!

[Steve Spag]

BUMP.

[Solace]

^^
Thanks beautiful!

Anytime handsome.

[Tash8]

The beat didn't fit her at all, it's like a rap, g-code type beat, and she's trying to sing like that on it, you kidding? Doesn't fit, but her voice is real hot just utilize it better.

your flow was tight spag, i see you were trying to fix up you're accent a bit, but it makes you sound a bit awkward. I also think the verse needed to be raised a db or two. I liked the lyrics, the last bar and how you ended it was great.

Overall: not a good combination of her voice, the beat. Your verse was good, it wasn't a verse that made the song like OH shit i gotta hear that a few more times.

[Steve Spag]

The beat didn't fit her at all, it's like a rap, g-code type beat, and she's trying to sing like that on it, you kidding? Doesn't fit, but her voice is real hot just utilize it better.

your flow was tight spag, i see you were trying to fix up you're accent a bit, but it makes you sound a bit awkward. I also think the verse needed to be raised a db or two. I liked the lyrics, the last bar and how you ended it was great.

Overall: not a good combination of her voice, the beat. Your verse was good, it wasn't a verse that made the song like OH shit i gotta hear that a few more times.

Thanks for the honest feed man, it's much appreciated! The volume for my vocals were actually a big higher before we bounced the song but I thought it sounded better with it reduced a bit, but then again that's just my personal preferance for this song.

Thanks again all!

[Dark Blue]

did u do the beat yourself??

[B.A.D.]

wait a second... isnt that jeannie ortega???? hahahaha
If Im not mistaken the original song features Papoose

well anyways, in your verse, I think its good but not near as good as papoose's..
kind of simple rhymes and flow for someone of your status

the delivery is good, and the mixing is high quality

average track from you in my opinion.
I like the more personal driven tracks.

keep it up

[ThomasAguanis]

The beat is nice for what it is.
The girl singing is alright, not really my thing to judge though.
I like how the beat breaks up before you get on
Your flow is pretty sick
Lyrics fit the track well.
Good job