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Postby d3vilgirl » Jan 26th, '06, 12:28

Tears of blood
Angel of my heart
Singing in my head
Dying in my bed...

Trying to believe
Trying to delete
The pain i've caused u'r heart
The love i have inside...

i like this one a lot :D i have more but they are in my native language... so no sense in posting them :D
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Postby rhiannon » Jan 28th, '06, 23:22

very gud lol :happy: did u make it urself?
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Postby Ivy » Jan 28th, '06, 23:24

Wow, what an emotional day...talkin' about sad movies, death, luv, and now sad poems...what else can cause my eyes to tear???? :'(
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby d3vilgirl » Jan 28th, '06, 23:34

of course i made it :D oh well... i was sad when i wrote it :D
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Postby Ivy » Jan 28th, '06, 23:35

Isn't that when some people right the best???....
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby d3vilgirl » Jan 28th, '06, 23:44

:) well in my case yes :P
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Postby Ivy » Jan 28th, '06, 23:45

Mine too :happy:
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Postby d3vilgirl » Jan 29th, '06, 00:21

ah good :D so i guess sadness is good from one point of view :D
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Postby Ivy » Jan 29th, '06, 00:39

Yes, actually it is....at least in my opinion it is.... :unsure:
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Postby d3vilgirl » Jan 29th, '06, 00:45

so... i guess i'm gonna get to write again soon... cuz i'm wuite sad... :(
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Postby Ivy » Jan 29th, '06, 00:46

Oh, I would ask why but it's not my business so, here's a hug :console:
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Postby Inzanity » Jan 29th, '06, 00:49

wow for a small peom that was pretty deep nice job
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Postby Ivy » Jan 29th, '06, 00:52

I know 8 lines and it gets to the point and over in like 15 seconds, I think we need to contact Genius Books Of World Records......but I think there's a poem that's only 2 lines...I can't remember.... :unsure:
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby d3vilgirl » Jan 29th, '06, 01:12

haha :D lol... thanks for the hug taylor :D so sweet of u :P
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Postby Ivy » Jan 29th, '06, 01:38

Thanks, I'm a very understanding person... :whistle:
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