.::Let It Rain::. (HAITI TRIBUTE) - Tash8

[Tash8]

.::Let It Rain::. HAITI TRIBUTE - Tash8
Description: It's not a tribute as much as how I feel about the situation.
Listen:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8701186
http://www.zshare.net/audio/719382910fc5a149/

Lyrics:
[talking]
shit happens, you know?
shit you can't see, can't expect
and when shit like that happens
you got think of the people it's affecting
take a look thru they eyes for a second
take a step in they shoes for a moment
feel what they feel
see what they see
or at least imagine it

[chorus]
let it rain, let me find all the pain i've held inside
but wait I hate that I'm here all alone
where I lie all by my-self
and oh rain, let it rain
let the pain wash away
oh wash away
let it rain, let me find all the pain i've held inside
but wait I hate that I'm here all alone
where I lie all by my-self
and oh rain, let it rain
let the pain wash away
oh wash away

[verse1]
imagine no heaven, no hope or no home
same old song
from haiti to orleans, the pain be enormous
the kennedy's before 'em, the painting drawn
what shame it's gone, yeah, shame i know
it's the same old show, cut the crap, time to grow
but the kinder the folk, less likely they show
it's all one image, they act don't live it
let it rain don't make it, all a big gimmic
get with it tell me of the club I'll join,
oh please please please
ain't nothing like being on another man's nuts, such joy
imagine a heaven, some hope, one home
then wait another minute then imagine it gone
destroyed like toys
but there ain't nothing lego 'bout this bold nigh voice
the bolder I get, the more colder it gets
i ain't talkin sex just a focus one bit
Polaroid this pic, dig your nose, expose it ( shit )
did you get it or not, i painted you a portrait
the troubles in my life occupying my mind, only if
only if I can

[talking]
cause you know
there's always gonna be tough time ahead
but its
how we get through it
how get through it, see that's what makes us stronger
let's go, yeah

[chorus]
let it rain, let me find all the pain i've held inside
but wait I hate that I'm here all alone
where I lie all by my-self
and oh rain, let it rain
let the pain wash away
oh wash away
let it rain, let me find all the pain i've held inside
but wait I hate that I'm here all alone
where I lie all by my-self
and oh rain, let it rain
let the pain wash away
oh wash away

[verse 2]
too many motherfuckers standing there lethargic
i'm naueous, exhausted to go all in
motives a bitch , who the fuck do we kid?
try your luck with this shit
cause the last who stands is the last who sits
sit down motherfucker ain't i ask you yet?
satisfy you yet?
cause the last who stands is the last who sits
yeah the last who stands is the last who sits
yeah take your ass out the sand, no more excuses kids

All feed is appreciated.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

great that you fixed the talking into the chorus better.


like i said, your voice on that chorus is perfect softly spoken to effective, it sounds excellent man, you did dope on the verses aswell, great track man

how does it feel for it to be clickin

[AJS2050]

Very Good Homie

[Dark Blue]

great job dude i like this chorus is the shit to lol

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lol@ the flow at the "please please please" part...reminded me of FACK by Em..had to get i out
flow struggled before that too..but aftet that your flow went couple stages up from there ...v

then wait another minute then imagine it gone
destroyed like toys
but there ain't nothing lego 'bout this bold nigh voice
the bolder I get, the more colder it gets
i ain't talkin sex just a focus one bit

but verse two flow kinda went down again...it was decent but not fresh if u know what i mean..
your pronouncation was kool didnt need the lyrics that much..delivery and lyrics were on point
hook was mixed good and not good at the same time..i felt it sounded a bit crowded..maybe some more panning right and left i dont know...how many Vocal Tracks did you record may i ask?
too bad you had them tags in there..lol hate beats like that..soundclick producer thing they the shit and need to tag everything smh...sorry for off topic
overall i felt the lyrics were true...nice lil song

[BabyBLue91]

Nice song! I like the background talk & love the chorus

[Tash8]

thanks guys... umm chris i had 6 vocal tracks for the hook that's just the singing then i had like a few more for humming and a few more for other sounds.

[Le Tunisien]

aight aight aight,the song was cool,the hook was nice even though i Hated the talking in the background i thought the hook would sound much better without it,and once again man your flow is nice when you do it like at that speed but I HATE IT when you stop and go again,those stop and go doenst sound nice,dont do that anymore,
and i really like the flow especially here

what shame it's gone, yeah, shame i know
it's the same old show, cut the crap, time to grow
but the kinder the folk, less likely they show

good song but i seen a lot better from you, keep making songs...oh wait,its time for a tash album!

[Tash8]

thanks and yeah i've heard about the stop n go flow countless of times, i know ya'll hate it and i wont be doing much of that anymore... anyways i think the talking on the hook is annoying but after a few listens believe me it'll settle...

and i'm not making an album, not yet..maybe a mixtape with like a few songs but not an album, wont be a reason for it yet..i'm not good enough

[EminemIVLife]

Very nice song. . I enjoyed everything really, verses, production, hook. At first the hook sounded corny but it's actually really class Good job.

[B.A.D.]

did u showed me this before... sounds very very familiar

on the singin on the hook... the structure and the idea is nice, but you sound completely un-toned. its like its well done but badly singed. for this type of hooks maybe you should like hmm... take some singing lessons, bcuz otherwise it will continue to sound like this.

verse 1 again sounds very very familiar. Im pretti sure you showed it to me before
nice flow, nice rhymes, nice message, all good

didnt liked the talking parts. but Its part of the beat so its all good

overall.... Ive heard WAAYYYY better from you... like Memory Lane and other collabs.

but this is not bad. keep at it man.

[Arabian Shady]

thnx for the heads up on the track appreciate it homie

I thought the talkin was wierd,lol but it DID settle in, actually sounded good.
the hook was wierd , i felt that a couple lines were out of place and didnt go with the beat.
the verses were dope, i felt that shit, the wordplay and flow were really good.
lol i must mention the stop and go flow, it kinda breaks the meaning and the zone which the listener is goin thru..so yea
all in all a good track

[Rapsoldier101]

Track overall was pretty good, I give it a 8.5/10

Beat was sick, who made it?? I like the hook alot, pretty catchy imo
Good concept, and very nice lyrics, it seemed the flow was off sometimes, but the last verse was the best, flow seemed on point the whole time

nice track bro

[Terry_M]

I think this was pretty good man, a good topic to make a song about, and the hook is mad catchy.

[Tash8]

thx for the feed guys