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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby Low Key » Feb 8th, '10, 02:03

10/10
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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby Tranquil » Feb 8th, '10, 02:04

:o FUCKING DOPE
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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby Strictt Ame » Feb 8th, '10, 02:14

flow was a bit choppy and your punches were played, could use some better metas and wordplay..but the personals were great!!!


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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby gutawafang » Feb 8th, '10, 03:37

It could be polished up a little. I think that the mutlis were terrific. Good choice of words. There's no flaw in this shit and I think it's got maximum potential to become a song. It deserves to be in the grammy's. :worship:
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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 8th, '10, 09:26

I'd hit it :whistle:
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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby Spyder » Feb 8th, '10, 22:39

i had a real hard time flowing it, i mean really choppy as every else said

that being said structurly it was fantastic multies vocab :worship:

notice Low Key was first to respond :coffee:
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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 9th, '10, 01:25

^ :whistle:
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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby gutawafang » Feb 9th, '10, 01:55

Spyder wrote:
notice Low Key was first to respond :coffee:

Oh. :unsure:
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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby SajN » Feb 9th, '10, 11:06

Needs to be recorded! :worship:
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Re: Scott Freestyle Diss

Postby gutawafang » Feb 9th, '10, 11:12

SajN wrote:Needs to be recorded! :worship:

HAHAHAHAHAA! The admin joins in the fun! :happy:
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