[New Single] Bar - Helping Hand (Produced By Mart85)

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

this track is something different when it comes to the beats i usually use and the style i would usually hit a more emotional song, hitting a uk mainstream sound, tornado will hear what this is a echeo off coz it is inspired by another song.

Bar - Helping Hand (Produced By Mart85)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-EGtiVZ0sHM


really like how this track came out, hope you all like it, feedback appreciated

Lyrics

eye's met drastic, so charismatic, could even have it
had to just past it
and a didnt like that no not one bit
but sometime will come and ill get my chance
now take my hands and follow me
i walk against the current now cant you see
im living in a life i dont want to live with
got a family that i cant even live with
got a mind that just takes the piss
could you beileive thats the frame i have to live with
not not this this is not for me
but if a pack my bags then were would i be
im not tryna be another homeless mc im just tryna be what i want to be
so let me, dont block my way, so dark inside i need the day

chorus/hook
balance the weight of the world that im holding
dont tackle the problems our hearts come cold then x2

im looking for a helping hand im just looking for a helping hand
we cant always be alone so im looking for a helping hand


so pull me out this ditch that im in
or let me ditch this film that im in
coz this cant be real life its so dam messed up
since ive been bron ive just built the stress up
used to lash out at people in school
socked one prick and thought i was kool
but reall i wasnt i was just a little punk trying
inside we;re all just little kids crying
keep trying i move in motion
got to be moses move the oceon
no succes im failing everything
cant do this i take on everything
no help then when i was looking for it
so do i help no one if there looking for it
look im for it, never done this then
another person who cant find his freind


see sometimes we just got try a little bit harder
but happens when our hardest fails ?
your left standing when the hardest bails
i been to the bottom of the ladder and back
only person who never doubted me was the rap
and that includes all members of my family
saying there's too much alchohal exporuse
screaming at me the drugs took over
then my head dropped they could tell
but i still had to go pick it up myself
its hell in this one place i live in
the average person would already give in
but im staying here were i stand
goin through the roughs what makes me a man
so stay calm, you aint alone now take the hand
prove youve grown

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i really liked it..and really can imagine a big audience liking it too..
lyrics,flow and delivery is on point
amazing mixing by mart
great track all in one....

[mart85]

glad you liked it c-riz

and props on posting the lyrics bar, there were parts I didn't understand at first, but now I can appreciate the track even more. But I'm still proud I could understand most of it at first, despite the scottish accent lol. I'm starting to understand the accent more

[Tash8]

woww that's dope. gimmie a download link right now... no joke bar but this imo has the enjoyablity of FUCK THE SYSTEM EP but at the same time it's tehnically good, it's got a fuckin SWIFT flow, dope lyrics, dope meaning and everything..good song love the mixing too FUCK U MART I HATE U ....good shit man


and mart, yo man i wanna get on a beat from u pleeasssseee

[classthe_king]

This was dope Flow was great and lyrics were good, not great but the subject and meaning of the song made up for that. Like mart said it was hard to understand you at some points but the lyrics helped. Chorus seemed a little bland for me, that was basically my only flaw with it. I'll be downloading your album

[AliJack]

I gotta say i usually hate british accents in rap but you pulled it off really well, i love the track, the beat also sounded abit to.. feminine for my taste.. but its a dope track, and your flow was really great, no complaints from me

[aleXander]

Sounds good. I think I have problems understanding your accent. Understood like 50% of it but there are lyrics posted so everything is fine. Lyrics are good and nice flow. Good mixing mart85.
I will listen again now.

[mart85]

and mart, yo man i wanna get on a beat from u pleeasssseee

I'm working on a little something these days... and you (and every rapper here) will/could benefit from it.

in the meantime, you could try rapping on our Forgive Me beat

[Tash8]

and mart, yo man i wanna get on a beat from u pleeasssseee

I'm working on a little something these days... and you (and every rapper here) will/could benefit from it.

in the meantime, you could try rapping on our Forgive Me beat

I don't have it anymore!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

thanx alot guys keep it coming

[S0 R3@L]

there was odd lines that i liked for example;

'saying there's too much alchohal exporuse
screaming at me the drugs took over'

nice flow.

However some lines left me waiting for a link/crossover/rhyming word.Just found myself at points waiting for the flow to go somewhere.

The first half of the hook is defo best bit about the song.Flowed perfect,great lyrics but most important for a hook....catchy.

The beat i liked but it didnt really go anywhere.Like addin additional strings mid second verse or guitar pluck ....whatever just something to break the repetition i found made the beat fade and loose my attention.

Overall your accent will always make your words unclear,we accept that,however over the years you have worked well improving 'pronouncing' (spellcheck) with a clear tone so gold star for that.

Be looking forward to the e.p drop

[Terry_M]

Really enjoyed it man, keep it up. I can see you going somewhere.

[Tornado]

This beat is reminiscent of that Chipmunk track, Oopsy Daisy. Yeh i see the mainstream appeal in UK but it's actually a good song, better than the chipmunk track IMO. To be honest, it did seem too much like a carbon copy but you've came on leaps and bounds and i see you going far..though ima always love the psycho bar

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

there was odd lines that i liked for example;

'saying there's too much alchohal exporuse
screaming at me the drugs took over'

nice flow.

However some lines left me waiting for a link/crossover/rhyming word.Just found myself at points waiting for the flow to go somewhere.

The first half of the hook is defo best bit about the song.Flowed perfect,great lyrics but most important for a hook....catchy.

The beat i liked but it didnt really go anywhere.Like addin additional strings mid second verse or guitar pluck ....whatever just something to break the repetition i found made the beat fade and loose my attention.

Overall your accent will always make your words unclear,we accept that,however over the years you have worked well improving 'pronouncing' (spellcheck) with a clear tone so gold star for that.

Be looking forward to the e.p drop

from give up, to that, everyone will love bar in the end

Really enjoyed it man, keep it up. I can see you going somewhere.

thanks alot man appreciate it

This beat is reminiscent of that Chipmunk track, Oopsy Daisy. Yeh i see the mainstream appeal in UK but it's actually a good song, better than the chipmunk track IMO. To be honest, it did seem too much like a carbon copy but you've came on leaps and bounds and i see you going far..though ima always love the psycho bar

thanx man, and yeh thats what it echoe's, i get the carbon copy thats not what i was trying to do, lately im just playing with styles oopsy daisy is probly one of the most succesful uk hip hop/pop crossover tracks in recent times i wanted to attempt that while keeping true to my own style.

physco bar aint goin no were though dont worry


thanx for the comments man

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

bump it up