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[SliK]

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[Fa-Q]

this has great flow...dope piece...whos this about

[SliK]

It's a long depressing story that wont end well for anyone, but it's about a girl.

The most amazing girl I've ever met.

[Fa-Q]

dude...i know how you feel.....shes like the sun....see her everyday...but always miles away, well maybe thats how the girl was i wrote about

Keep your chin up man, and keep writing about her...its bringing the best outta you

[SliK]

Cheers dude I swear I didn't even see your dream piece when I wrote this... Hope you don't think I'm trying to bite your style... I had a dream about her last night and had to get it off my chest.

[Fa-Q]

Never even crossed my mind....we should collab sometime

[SliK]

I'd love to collab some time but I hardly get the time to write anymore... The last time I wrote anything was over a month ago I'd hate to agree to something then keep you waiting for ages

[Fa-Q]

its all good...whenever you get time drop me something...i can do any kind of song

[Spyder]

fa-q you will meet selena one day

and dope pice bro, as you said structurly nutin special but the concept was nice

[Fa-Q]

Ive met her Spy....she was at a signing in KC once...and of course i went...shes forealforeal amazing

[Spyder]

and u didnt take her into your car and seduce her

[Fa-Q]

and u didnt take her into your car and seduce her

She had a doctors appointment

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

This is really great, but a have a suggestion.
"I see something amazing, he sees an abnormality"
might make more sense as
"I see something amazing, he sees a normality"
Because she's not special to him, she's just "normal".
But you see her for something different, something special.
An abnormality, in this case, is a good thing.

[SliK]

Thanks man, I guess the point I was trying to make is that the things I think are unique and amazing are the things he doesn't like or thinks are weird. But it's what makes her who she is.