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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby mcZu » Feb 22nd, '10, 21:38

_Ironic_ wrote:however i feel you coulda done alot better on the doubles and adlibs...some times they were off, and gave it a bad echo effect...

That's what I was looking for.. That together with the instruments on the beat made it sound like you punched in, lol..
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Tash8 » Feb 22nd, '10, 23:07

thanks guys...i'll take everything u guys say into consideration
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 22nd, '10, 23:54

_Ironic_ wrote:okay, i actually listened to this last night but didnt have time to feed,
i like the lyrics and the vibe the rhymes give off...however i feel you coulda done alot better on the doubles and adlibs...some times they were off, and gave it a bad echo effect


totally

also the emotion was lackluster.The lyrics wernt the problem just the way you got them across.
And the singing hook was not to my taste.

Not a bad track tho and will defo peep future stuff :y:
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby classthe_king » Feb 23rd, '10, 01:59

This was a great track. I can't wait for your album. Lyrics were great and all that, as usual. The chorus was good, but it was kind of boring. You need the hook to stand out more.
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Xray » Feb 23rd, '10, 02:31

Probably your worse song I've heard. Mixing was terrible, and the delivery is lazy as fuck/boring as fuck. Flow was meh. And you took some deep breaths that weren't necessary at times. Not feeling this track and I thought the singing was just flat out gay/horrible. Tash you been smoking too much bro. Cause that hook was lmfao just bad bro. You can't sing motherfucker so don't. You got a bad singing voice. Although I like the parts where you rap, the little bridge that was good. Only thing I liked about this track was that. Everything else was. :n: Lyrics were same old shit, nothing new but the same tired ass shit. Find better concepts man you've over done this.
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Tash8 » Feb 23rd, '10, 02:41

Xray wrote:Cause that hook was lmfao just bad bro. You can't sing motherfucker so don't. You got a bad singing voice.


I realize it's a weakness :confusion: why do you think i been focusing on it so much?

thanks though

classthe_king wrote:This was a great track. I can't wait for your album. Lyrics were great and all that, as usual. The chorus was good, but it was kind of boring. You need the hook to stand out more.


i feel you, i feel it needs some more strength.
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby gutawafang » Feb 23rd, '10, 02:43

I'm not the in depth type. LOL. I'ma just say it's worth the listen, nice beat. The beat's like Where'd You Go by Fort Minor. LOL. It's good. :y:
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Xray » Feb 23rd, '10, 02:45

Tash8 wrote:
Xray wrote:Cause that hook was lmfao just bad bro. You can't sing motherfucker so don't. You got a bad singing voice.


I realize it's a weakness :confusion: why do you think i been focusing on it so much?

thanks though

Well why do you bring it on peoples tracks? I mean why did you sing in the hook if you know your bad at it atm? Seems selfish and weird to me. And this is a single for Chambers tape and you just fucked up the hook... That's what I mean when I say its a bad hook, its not about if you can sing or not. Its about you not knowing how to sing and yet you still do it because you like it yet you suck at it.

@ Coleon - I tell it like it is. You can praise a bad song all you want and call it amazing, but the fact is you just seem dumb calling a bad track, amazing. Not saying you called it amazing, just an example. No one learns from good feedback...
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 23rd, '10, 02:49

so...let me get this straight?....

when i do bragging tracks...i overdo that...
when i do deep tracks....i overdo that...
when i do personal tracks......i overdo that....

tbh...there ain't much left to do...i ain't gonna do "Gangsta" tracks......becuz...well i ain't gangsta...i don't smoke or drink much...and i just haven't felt a story come to mind.....


i ain't trying to sound cocky.....becuz i've taken most feed and try to flip it around for positive......but that right there was prolly the most sucker shit i've ever heard....and i've always kinda held your opinion up higher then most on this site cuz you were straight forward and ain't sugar coat shit....and i respect that...always have....
but after that......you made it sound like i just dropped the worst song on TR history...which i know for a fact isn't true......

if it ain't your type of song cool i'd understand...but this isn't a "Bad track"...and no that ain't my arrogance talking....there are flaws obviously.......but they don't completely damage the song...so take that tired "oh look at me i'm bitter as fuck" shit outta here.....
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Xray » Feb 23rd, '10, 02:55

That's not your arrogance talking, that's your ego. You don't want to accept the fact its a bad track cause you spent some time on it, so its understandable. But I never said it like that, its not the worse track on TR. It's YOUR worse track I've heard. YOURS. There's a difference.

Anyways I left my opinion and that's how I see this track, I'm out of here. Next time I'll make sure to suck your dick so you can like my feed. :wave:

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Xray wrote:@ Coleon - I tell it like it is. You can praise a bad song all you want and call it amazing, but the fact is you just seem dumb calling a bad track, amazing. Not saying you called it amazing, just an example. No one learns from good feedback...


Uhmm I give my full fledged honest opinion on every track, I'm not a dick ridin newb anymore

and never has any (good) honest criticism required the phrase

lmfao just bad bro. You can't sing motherfucker


idk maybe you feel threatened so you have to come into have the audio threads with e-beef on their tracks, but if you really think they are bad don't be such a douche about it

Dude stfu and mind your business. Your being a dickrider right now. I don't hate you or anything, but right now your just hopping on my dick for something that doesn't concern you what so ever.
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Tash8 » Feb 23rd, '10, 02:59

Xray wrote:Well why do you bring it on peoples tracks? I mean why did you sing in the hook if you know your bad at it atm? Seems selfish and weird to me. And this is a single for Chambers tape and you just fucked up the hook... That's what I mean when I say its a bad hook, its not about if you can sing or not. Its about you not knowing how to sing and yet you still do it because you like it yet you suck at it.


Nah man, quit this nonsense.
This ain't your type of track, my hook isn't the type to appeal to you or most real hip hop fans for that matter. It appeals to the main public. Which is why I used it on a first single, cause this song isn't for you; it's for the main audience.
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Xray » Feb 23rd, '10, 03:01

No. You can't sing. And that's not Sajjad talking, that's the Lady Gaga version of Sajjad talking. :coffee:
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 23rd, '10, 03:04

Xray wrote:That's not your arrogance talking, that's your ego. You don't want to accept the fact its a bad track cause you spent some time on it, so its understandable. But I never said it like that, its not the worse track on TR. It's YOUR worse track I've heard. YOURS. There's a difference.

Anyways I left my opinion and that's how I see this track, I'm out of here. Next time I'll make sure to suck your dick so you can like my feed. :wave:

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Xray wrote:@ Coleon - I tell it like it is. You can praise a bad song all you want and call it amazing, but the fact is you just seem dumb calling a bad track, amazing. Not saying you called it amazing, just an example. No one learns from good feedback...


Uhmm I give my full fledged honest opinion on every track, I'm not a dick ridin newb anymore

and never has any (good) honest criticism required the phrase

lmfao just bad bro. You can't sing motherfucker


idk maybe you feel threatened so you have to come into have the audio threads with e-beef on their tracks, but if you really think they are bad don't be such a douche about it

Dude stfu and mind your business. Your being a dickrider right now. I don't hate you or anything, but right now your just hopping on my dick for something that doesn't concern you what so ever.


now your just being a lil emotional bitch about it...i believe you critiqued my mixing on one of my songs and the next song you even said it got better.....so don't give me that "oh well you just looking to get your dick sucked"....no...i try to improve on my shit...but i can also sense bullshit from a mile away.....and i believe i just said "i respected your opinion most becuz you never sugar coated it"...so please spare that "Bigger man" shit........like i said...if it isn't your type of track...whatever...i understand....just say that...but to say it was a "Bad song"........i've accepted all the bad feedback in this thread with the good

i shoulda had more climax in my bars
i coulda blended my dubs a lil better
my mixing coulda been a lil better....

but give me a fucking break....
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Medicine Ball » Feb 23rd, '10, 03:05

chambers wrote:
tbh...there ain't much left to do...i ain't gonna do "Gangsta" tracks......becuz...well i ain't gangsta...i don't smoke or drink much...and i just haven't felt a story come to mind.....


smoking and drinking makes you gangster? i didn't know that.
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Re: Pressing On ft. Tash8(Produced by Sinima) Single!

Postby Xray » Feb 23rd, '10, 03:17

Look I love you all and I will buy your CD's if I ever see it. Simple as that. And ok in my opinion this track wasn't my type except it is my type, it was just done wrong and could be fixed by a re-recording. Stupid Sajjad you dumb motherfucker next time leave proper feed. :angry:
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