



Drunkendeath wrote:wtf? i'm not that old, and this is the internet...


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gutawafang wrote:It rhymes, but it's like a stanza of a poem. So, it rhymes like
1
2
1
2






trinell05 wrote:gutawafang wrote:It took 6 whole hours, and 5 long days ,
4 all your lies to come undone ,
and those 3 small words, were way 2 late,
Cuz you can't see that I'm the 1.
'done' and 'one' rhymes
days and late don't really rhyme but it's like an "a" rhyme.
In the song she like, holds the note on both days and late, so they kinda rhyme.







Drunkendeath wrote:sucks. a chipmunk could have thought of that.



trinell05 wrote:gutawafang wrote:I always thought you wrote that, Trinell. Yeah, nice song indeed.
I wish I could write cute things like that. Most of my rhymes involve gay sex, lol.His ass gets smaller, my dick gets bigger
Like to lick it fo I dig in, make mo room for a n***a





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