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C-Riz feat. Jay-19 (and Cryptic Wisdom) - Lay Myself To Rest

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C-Riz feat. Jay-19 (and Cryptic Wisdom) - Lay Myself To Rest

Postby Jay-19 » Mar 4th, '10, 23:02

Aight, Chris threw this awesome track together, mad props to him!
It has Cryptic Wisdom on the chorus. :y:

Enjoy! :smoking:

C-Riz f. Jay-19 & Cryptic Wisdom - Lay Myself To Rest.mp3 - 4.8 Mb

http://www.zshare.net/audio/7343669121e45fc1/
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Re: C-Riz feat. Jay-19 (and Cryptic Wisdom) - Lay Myself To Rest

Postby Tash8 » Mar 4th, '10, 23:30

jay nice flow, damn nice flow love it...great verse
c-riz love the verse, i also love that mixing

love the hook

great song
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Re: C-Riz feat. Jay-19 (and Cryptic Wisdom) - Lay Myself To Rest

Postby Jay-19 » Mar 4th, '10, 23:34

Thanks for checkin' it out Tash!
Glad you liked it! :b:
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Postby Solace » Mar 5th, '10, 01:02

All Imma say is that this is tight. :smoking:
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Postby Jay-19 » Mar 5th, '10, 03:34

Appreciate it Solace! :b: :b:
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Postby Slice » Mar 5th, '10, 13:10

i don't know which verse was better cuz you both did great verses :y:
awesome hook, i like it
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Re: C-Riz feat. Jay-19 (and Cryptic Wisdom) - Lay Myself To Rest

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 5th, '10, 14:35

propz to everyone :flower:
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 6th, '10, 14:53

eh feed? anyone? :flower:
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Re: C-Riz feat. Jay-19 (and Cryptic Wisdom) - Lay Myself To Rest

Postby _Ironic_ » Mar 6th, '10, 17:59

beat, i like the piano, pretty dope work there...

chorus...catchy..9/10
first verse: flow is pretty nice..and your delivery has improved tremendously...I like the grimey voice u got goin on in this track. I haven't heard one of ur tracks in awhile...very well done mixing, and adlibs are flawless :y: :y:

2nd verse: multies are pretty smooth, flows on point, and I like your voice as well....couple times I heard u take breathes..thats the only thing I can really hate on with this track...overall this is super dope..

C-Riz one of ur better tracks...this is hot man.
ya'll both did ur thing. keep doin it

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Postby Jay-19 » Mar 6th, '10, 19:24

Thanks for the feed Ironic! :b: :b:
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Postby Xray » Mar 7th, '10, 06:59

Love the beat. Seems like Cryptic Wisdom shits out dope hooks, don't think I've heard a bad hook from him. C-Riz, your flows cool on here but I think the lyrics need some stepping up. When you choose to use a slow flow, your lyrics are gonna have to be really hard hitting to deliver. Your delivery was cool and it worked but I would of enjoyed it more if you had more aggression in there like Jay's verse.

Jay your verse had an awesome flow. You stepped up like a motherfucker. Lyrics were dope, and the delivery was FIRE. Dope verse man, I really liked it. :worship:

Track was mixed real nice, and overall its a dope track. Something I'd listen to again. :b: :worship:
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Re: C-Riz feat. Jay-19 (and Cryptic Wisdom) - Lay Myself To Rest

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 7th, '10, 12:00

thanks ronic and sajjad :flower:
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Postby s3nd!ke » Mar 7th, '10, 16:07

I think I should check this section more often than I usually do. :o Hehe...

I'm not an expert here to judge the track, but my amateur ears did like this very much!
Awesome beat & flow. Dope track, guys!

Def goes to my playlist. :smoking:
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 7th, '10, 18:49

thank you man :worship:
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Re: C-Riz feat. Jay-19 (and Cryptic Wisdom) - Lay Myself To Rest

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 7th, '10, 21:44

Damn, the hook is incredible.... I loved it :worship: :worship: :worship:

Damn c-riz, I love your mixing, clean as fuck, plus very very nice reverb effect in there, I love also the creative voice overs you did. plus I think I found your main problem, you need to improve your Enlgish grammar so things can make sence better and a little bit of the pronunciation... I like the flow, slow but agressive, this is a nice verse, probably top 10 out of you... also man, up the lyrics a bit man, you got it all, now upgrade the lyrics. overall excelent verse.

Jay-19, came in strong, normally Swedish people speak very good English, so that helps you out a lot, also this mixing is amazing, sounds studio quality... I love the flow, very very very Professional, I dig it. :worship: nothing bad about it, excelence.

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