First thing I gotta say is... God Bless Datpiff... best download system ever.
now.
01. Dont Sign Me (Intro)
Very mixtape feeling on this one, Hmm... strange Sinima beat, never heard this style from him before. but Your style actually fits this particular one real good... I love the self-praise punchlines u have there. But this track lacks of creativity, its an average Hip Hop Track. nice rapped hook, keepin it classic. 6/10
02. Dont Sign Him (skit)
fuck's this chambers?...

03. Still TC
Hmm... I think I heard this one before, dunno why?... is it a re-recorded track or??... either way, I like it, again nice punch game u got there. the hook is ok for being rapped... I like the flow, nice beat choice again your style fits this beat real good... I hope there's more conceptual or topic tracks, this first two are very similar, although not bad. 7/10
04. Demons
the sticcy z diss.... I think I posted feed to this before... and I think you didnt follow my advise, you should remove the hook and leave the background choirs... or do an excelent hook on it, good flow, no personals but still good punches, I love the delivery.... a very good track, except for the hook, but I like the 360 change on the delivery, smoother and realer, I like it. 7/10
05. Interaction (skit)
Hmm hahaha...
06. Delusions Of Grandeur (ft. M-Russ)
Oh... I like this beat, who's it from?? nice vibe there man... fucker... sucker???... wack rhyme. the rest is pretti good tho. I like this verse... Hmm... this M-Russ, seems like he didnt wrote his verse for this beat, his flow dont go with the beat. He pulled out a Vettori on there hahahahahahah. Nothing Interesting about his verse. ...oh him again....

.... Only thing good on this track is your verse... the hook.... its cool I guess... yeah, does the job. 5/10
07. Hustle To Survive (ft. Jae Rock)
Dont get me wrong, but I cant picutre you "hustling to survive"... about the track, hook is actually good in here I dig it. but very good verse, I like it, real speakin on there, so far Im loving this track. now Jae Rock, everybody is "Jae" this days hahaha... smFh... bu this dude's nize, great verse he brought, good flow, kinda wack mixing tho. You verse 3... nice man... flow is good, although is the same flow you always use, get more creative with it man. but I like the track. 8/10
08. Successful (ft. Trey blah blah)
Already fed
09.Labels (skit)
whats this bullshit man??
10.This Is Me
I like the crowd sample at the begining. what was it for tho?... Hmm... where did I heard this hook before??... did you posted it before??..... damn Im loving this... really loving it... realness in the track, oh, plus the beat makes it perfect... beauty.... Damn man.... fuck.... this track has a high replay value. best track so far. 10/10
11.Just Another Day
oh mr. 2 deep doin his thang again... hot stuff here, damn, again a real nice vibe, good delivery your flow reminds me of old Eminem... very very similar, (thats not a bad thing)... I like it.... hook... Hmmm.. damn, some nice rock type singing would do the job there... good track, another high replay value, plus I love the sotry type lyrics on this man, really good track. 9/10
12.You Think This Is Easy (Skit)
Whats with the girl on the phone, I dont like her.
13. Pressing On (feat. Tash)
Beat... Hmmm... its ok, I like it... Hmm, but your delivery is too diferent from the beat here, you didnt achieve it on here as good on the other deep tracks before... WTF??? tash hahaha... dude.... this is BAD singing hahaha, damn, Im sorry If I sound harsh but that is Horrible... eeewww... really. If you want to sing that way you shou;d take classes because youre WAY out of tone... you can try to melodize but dont sing like that man. Verse is oke, same thing as the first.... the outro is... meh. Worst track on the album so far 2/10
14. I Love You
hahaha damn man, your sining on that is horrible too hahahha, Jesus Lord. but seems like done on purpose, I dont know tho' hahahha... but I like the style there man, daymn, you made a 360 turn again on here man, this is great. REAL REAL good.... its a shame about the hook. But definitively a good track, Im just gonna skip the hook when I replay it, cuz other than that is hot... Plus damn, nice lines man, some very good bars. Love it 9/10
15. Drain Me Dry
hahaha, I heard this beat on the sinima page... the thing that sucks of using soundclick beats is that the album, mixtape, whatever, doesnt sound unique... sounds too "same as the rest"... but taking that out,.fuck man, you really pouring it out here, I love it, this is just excelent man, and its a shame too man, that you use soundclick beats, bcuz I imagine this track on an exclusive custom beat and would be one of the best forum tracks I would ever hear... I will be listening to this track a lt man, beautifull. One of my favs too 10/10
16. Pressure (Skit)
17. I'm Always (ft. B-Don)
This is bad mixed man... can't hear it..... volume of the track is too low, fix that ASAP and re-upload if possible cuz of what I can hear sounds interesting.
18. Your Hook (Skit)
Dear Lord Have MErcy On My Soul!!!
19. City Is Mine
song is not working
20. Lights Out (ft. Staks)
ooh hot beat, nice choice... damn, dark Tom Chambers, I like it here, cool flow, youre 100% american, cuz you sound like having an accent there... or maybe Australia has affected me too much. good first verse, Eww, I dont like the hook, very bad harmonizing. lol at this Stacks dude hahahaha, Tryng to Hard. Cant fuck with Shade Shiest man. plus bad mixing. I liked the first verse, hated the second and the hook.... 6/10
21. The Offer (Skit)
What a bad way to end the album.
you should've ended it with Drain Me Dry man.
I Go Off
- Already fed this when u uploaded.
Hustle To Survive
another verse here??.... hmmm
OVERALL;-
good album man. my mind is kind of empty right now... this is 100% mixtape, but its great for what it is. Gotta say that I enjoyed it a lot, and I enjoy leaving feed to it. Many many tracks have replay value, some if dont. about the beats, damn, Im willing to supply you with All the beats for an album, exclusive and customly made, but dont depend on soundclick or youtube producers, its bad for you.
I like how you kept it on topic, all the flows where good, your mixing process and mastering of the tracks is excelent, not a single complain about that. Except track 17 which something went wrong apparently hahahha. Some of your friends tho' had a pretti bad quality. Audio Wise. also re-up the track 19. cuz didnt work on me. Lasted like 0.01 seconds hahaha.
so... to finish it up. I'll give this album a 9 out of 10. simply bcuz you liked doing it, and clearly you made a good effort to it, you poured your heart out and you made a song about most of the topics you could covewr. It wouldnt hurt some times in a while getting a little out of your context to experiment, who knows... right??.... Also shame its a mixtape, I would love to see a Conceptual Album Long Player from you. and Like I said, Im willing to help you out on that. for Free... Im studying Music Production man. trust me. and well...... to sum it up.
EXCELENCE.
and a final bow.
I Respect
oh oh... btw... The skits suck. (I dont hate skits, but I didnt liked yourse.) lol
