^good looks on breaking that shit down...i appreciate the listen...and glad you semi-enjoyed it lol
i got siinide and you chris with some feedback once i get home from work tonight.......
Xray wrote:Aight I just heard it. Not gonna leave a big review cause I'll be repeating myself so I'm gonna keep it somewhat understandable...
Flaws:
- The vocals are really low on some tracks and just low on the majority of the tracks so it made it hard to understand everything. If you had turned up the vocals by like 2 db's then it would of made it easier to understand it all.
- 'Still T.C' is distorted, should have put the beat down before you mastered the vocals with it, cause it only made it sound louder...
- On 'Demons' you messed up on the hook towards the end. You said barrels instead of battles on the second verse. You should step closer to the microphone so your speech becomes a little more clearer, but be careful you can distort your vocals easily.
- Songs like 'City Is Mine' & 'Successful' you didn't need. It just sounded way too average and I didn't see anything Tom Chambers about those tracks. It's the kind of tracks a lot of rappers will have on there mixtapes now a days and that's what I dislike about it. Very predictable.
- Bad guest appearances. I don't know if I've told you before but M-Russ sounds like George Bush rapping, just has a very funny delivery. Except for B-Don his listenable and Official Jae Rock, dudes dope.
Favourite tracks by order:
1. Hustle To Survive (both versions) - A-fucking-mazing. The hook is fucking dope as fuck. Your flow is untouchable on this track. And Jae Rock's verse was dope as a motherfucker. I love this track. It just outshines the whole album, crazy fucking beat.
2. Just Another Day - Beautiful beat. Love how you put this track after 'This Is Me' cause it worked out real nice and it made it sound better somehow.
3. Demons - Hook is great (except for that little slip up but fuck it, the rest is dope). Dope track.
4. This Is Me - Another great track.
5. I'm Always ft. B-Don - Dope collab. Who made the beat? It's dope.
Yep I guess that's it, those are my favourite tracks. Great tape bro just work on those flaws I mentioned which aren't much anyways, so great fucking work homie. I'd listen to this album again no problem, it was put together great and I liked the skits lol. Reminds me of Masta Ace's Long Hot Summer. You show a lot of your influences in your rhymes, and its good because a style needs a few styles to be unique. Peace out.
Xray wrote:I hustle everyday, I hustle for my life...![]()
Damn I just HAVE TO make a part 2 of that song. If you're up for a part 2 let me know. WE KEEP THE HOOK.
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