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Weigh Me Down

Postby Tash8 » Mar 10th, '10, 18:53

new track guys, feed is appreciated
http://www.zshare.net/audio/73546932e8f22e87/
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8866854


lyrics:
we're born and raised with more than brains
give yourself time to grow them strengths
don't show restraint till we old n gray
cause the only thing stopping you is you
don't think you can't, just think you'll do
and see the difference is
you hope you win, I know I will
like a poker game, (its all or nill)
you hold the hards, so show them skill
a chance like this doesn't happen much
go full speed but fasten up
never let emotions weigh you down
use your sense what you say does sound
confidence in not what you say but what you do
and that sum it up in a nutshell or two
but after all it matters most
can't think straight, think adderall and I'll
I'll be here

[chorus x2]
I'll be here don't weigh me down
I've finally found this solid ground
and now it sounds, I have it good but
you gotta understand these things it took

and
again I'll say what I said before
dream for the top, dont dread the fall
i'm the best in the west so rest assured
I'm the elliot ness, the "Untouchable"
and if you don't agree? then fuck you all
i found oasis, (a wonderwall)
as days gets colder, and thunder draws
my infatuation keeps me strong

[chorus x2]
I'll be here don't weigh me down
I've finally found this solid ground
and now it sounds, I have it good but
you gotta understand these things it took

just look haiti, these sad things happen
all the time be mad it happened
but we gotta rise, rise as one
each life is precious, a pearl in essence (but)
but to be worth something it's part of necklace (yup)
we work together, so united we stand
or else we fall from the lace and down
i'm here to love, man fuck the hate
fu-fuck the hate, what a waste [x2]

[chorus x2]

stand -- strong
we can't, fall

stand -- strong
we can't, fall
and I'll be here
stay with me

(yeah fuck you)
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby Tash8 » Mar 11th, '10, 04:53

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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby Tash8 » Mar 11th, '10, 06:32

SiiNiDE wrote:The flow was good. Your annunciation got messed up on the line "use your sense what you say does good." But other than that, it was pretty on point.

Your emotion was good. It didn't sway too much either way. the beat was decent, I liked it. The only part I didnt like was the fade out / back in during the middle of the song, lol.

Your singing at the end was funny :P


O/A I liked the vibe of the track. The flow fit perfectly and your delivery upped it nice.


thx man..the singing at the end was a big fuck you to everyone.
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 11th, '10, 11:57

this was a really good track tash
your flow was nice and so was the delivery big step up
but wtf is up with everyone goin double time since Eminem came out with Forever.. :shakehead:
but it was kool for what it was....2nd verse sounded different to me..mixing-wise..idk why..
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 11th, '10, 12:38

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:this was a really good track tash
your flow was nice and so was the delivery big step up
but wtf is up with everyone goin double time since Eminem came out with Forever.. :shakehead:
but it was kool for what it was....2nd verse sounded different to me..mixing-wise..idk why..


im pretty sure eminem didnt invent double time :whistle:
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby randomghost » Mar 11th, '10, 13:26

i like the pianos...nice beat...even though its hard to flow on a beat like dat..but u managed 2...good jon :y: nice touchy lyrics...hook is nice :y: verse 2 got amazing deleivery...nice song bro :y:
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby Tash8 » Mar 11th, '10, 16:48

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:this was a really good track tash
your flow was nice and so was the delivery big step up
but wtf is up with everyone goin double time since Eminem came out with Forever.. :shakehead:
but it was kool for what it was....2nd verse sounded different to me..mixing-wise..idk why..


sorry man i been flowing double time way before eminem on forever...plus it's pretty damn obvious i can do it better than regular time sooo...

but thanks for the feed guys.
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby Kez » Mar 11th, '10, 18:21

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:this was a really good track tash
your flow was nice and so was the delivery big step up
but wtf is up with everyone goin double time since Eminem came out with Forever.. :shakehead:
but it was kool for what it was....2nd verse sounded different to me..mixing-wise..idk why..


im pretty sure eminem didnt invent double time :whistle:


He'd have a heart attack if he came to the UK

Anyway yeah Tash you keep improvin man lol i'm likin the track. The beat is perfect for the song, and your flow is always on point through this song. The lyrics are great, i liked the Oasis reference haha. Delivery is improving too i can feel the emotion in this song more, much clearer, i like. The hook works perfect. Uh shit basically this song is a big improvement, i liked it a lot haha. The fuck was with the fading out in the middle though? I thought my headphones were breaking or something lmao.

But yeah, great song man keep it up :y:
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby yoshi » Mar 11th, '10, 20:16

nice one Tash :happy: good flow, but it reminds me a bit of TI.. which kinda pisses me off cause i hate the guy with a passion for no apparent reason, but fuck it. you sound good, lyrics are good and i lol'd at you singing :shifty:
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby Tash8 » Mar 11th, '10, 20:51

yoshi wrote:nice one Tash :happy: good flow, but it reminds me a bit of TI.. which kinda pisses me off cause i hate the guy with a passion for no apparent reason, but fuck it. you sound good, lyrics are good and i lol'd at you singing :shifty:


thx hahhaa and you said I sound like T.I. in my other song....fuck lol..and the singing hahaha it was a big fuck you to everyone like i was saying.

Kez wrote:Anyway yeah Tash you keep improvin man lol i'm likin the track. The beat is perfect for the song, and your flow is always on point through this song. The lyrics are great, i liked the Oasis reference haha. Delivery is improving too i can feel the emotion in this song more, much clearer, i like. The hook works perfect. Uh shit basically this song is a big improvement, i liked it a lot haha. The fuck was with the fading out in the middle though? I thought my headphones were breaking or something lmao.

But yeah, great song man keep it up :y:


thx man, thx a bunch
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby classthe_king » Mar 11th, '10, 22:38

Your rapping on this is the best i've seen from you. Your flow and delivery were great. I liked the hook too. Good track :y:
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 11th, '10, 23:27

now this is sick.I really like it.

Beat is solid,delievery is wicked,production is ace.

Didnt really like the part where it drops out :confusion:

some parts needed tighting on lyrics :facepalm but the majority was great.


Good job man,best audio on here in ages. :y: :b:
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby Tash8 » Mar 12th, '10, 00:34

$0 R3@L wrote:now this is sick.I really like it.

Beat is solid,delievery is wicked,production is ace.

Didnt really like the part where it drops out :confusion:

some parts needed tighting on lyrics :facepalm but the majority was great.


Good job man,best audio on here in ages. :y: :b:


thx bro

yeah I hate the part where the beat drops, I obviously didn't do it properly.


classthe_king wrote:Your rapping on this is the best i've seen from you. Your flow and delivery were great. I liked the hook too. Good track :y:


thx bro, btw i'm still trying to make you that next memory lane.
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby Nick. Y » Mar 12th, '10, 11:04

this song is one of the best I've listened ot TR recently Tash.Maybe there are 1,2 places where the flow slips a bit and that fading was unnecessary but I like every other element of the track. :y:
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Re: Weigh Me Down

Postby Jay-19 » Mar 12th, '10, 13:48

There's no doubt you got skills Tash, but this was not something I liked.

The beat is not good in my opinion. It seems too, uuh, don't really know what words to use here... but it's not my cup of tea.

Flow is solid throughout the whole track, so good job on that. :y:

But I'd like to see you spit some aggressive shit you know, get raw and dirty on track. :smoking:

And that "fuck the hate, what a waste" was not something I enjoyed.
Seemed out of place and didn't fit the track at all in my opinion.


Anyways, keep up the good work Tash. :b: :b:
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