Weigh Me Down

[Tash8]

this song is one of the best I've listened ot TR recently Tash.Maybe there are 1,2 places where the flow slips a bit and that fading was unnecessary but I like every other element of the track.

word thx man!

There's no doubt you got skills Tash, but this was not something I liked.

The beat is not good in my opinion. It seems too, uuh, don't really know what words to use here... but it's not my cup of tea.

Flow is solid throughout the whole track, so good job on that.

But I'd like to see you spit some aggressive shit you know, get raw and dirty on track.

And that "fuck the hate, what a waste" was not something I enjoyed.
Seemed out of place and didn't fit the track at all in my opinion.


Anyways, keep up the good work Tash.

i'm planning to do an aggresive track next.l..i actually had one lined up with sajjad dunno what happened

[BabyBLue91]

Nice Tash! Youre doing an aggressive type song next, yeah? I'm looking forward to something a little more hardcore keep it coming!

[Tash8]

Nice Tash! Youre doing an aggressive type song next, yeah? I'm looking forward to something a little more hardcore keep it coming!

thanks...yeah aggressive song comin up next...idk if u guys will be expecting this

[_Ironic_]

beat is kinda simplistic, but does its job..not a big fan though

flow on this is pretty nice, it keeps a consistent pace.

I like the chorus, it makes the track much more enjoyable...props for that

your delivery is somewhat annoying...its most likely your voice so theres nothin u can do about it. i just wasnt really feelin it.

some advice for when the beat stops...keep rappin and pretend the beat is still there...and when u connect the beat will drop..it gives it a much more professional sound than the silence thing u got goin on.

overall I think the chorus really made this song..the verses were pretty good..but I think the hook is what really made this track (which is always good for a commercial appeal)

8.75/10 with hook
7/10 without it

keep droppin bro, and thanks for the feedback on my last track I might be able to squeeze you onto some kinda song in the near future, but I got chambers and eminemislegend in front of you..but ill keep in touch bro

[Jay-19]

i'm planning to do an aggresive track next.l..i actually had one lined up with sajjad dunno what happened

Glad to hear that man!
Looking forward to it!

Hit me up if you're interested in a collabo btw!

[Le Tunisien]

good drop tash i really like this track flow was good,there was some flaws ofc ,
keep doin ya thing bro !

[Tash8]

thanks

[B.A.D.]

uuuhhh... nice

I dont like the beat a lot... well, it starts really crappy, then it kinda grew on me, but not my favourite.

Firtst thing I gotta say is that the hook is genious, that and the first vese where the best parts of the song imo, I love the emotion on the hook...

I can see you switch your mixing method cuz this sounds on a very good volume, and more more clean. very good mixing on this one

verse 2 was great until it like... fades or something, what was that?? lmao

Flow throughout the song shines, this is the best flow I've heard from you.. its perfect UNTIL!!!!... verse 3 .... verse 3 was a big step down for the song, the flow gets choppy, after the 8th bar, it goes strange, that effecty thingy doesnt work on tracks like this. depends a lot on the topic

the outro... I dont know who the "Fuck you" was too... but this also doesnt go in a serious song.

overall..... almost as good as Memory Lane. I can see a very very very BIG step up, specially on the hook and on verse 1. that made the song for me. after the weird fade out on verse 2 the track looses a lot of weight.

But man... gotta say Im proud to see you getting better and better. I'd like to work on a modern artistical conceptual track with you if you down

[Tash8]

of course man, hit me up on msn

txh for the feed

[youngfire420]

Love the beat, alot.

You got killer flow man, hardly ever feel off on the flow. Like the chorus too! Lyrics fit really nice with the song.

This song is definitely download worthy! Keep it up bro.

[Tash8]

thx a lot bro

[TripleNineThree]

Good song overall man!!

First verse - I really liked the flow on it, your flow never really fell off, and I like the times you took it fast, and did double time on it, it sounded really sick bro

Chorus - Its somewhat catchy.. In my opinion I think it could have some more things onto it. More addlibs or double it up or something I'm not sure, but overall the chorus was pretty catchy and I like the way it was wrote

2nd Verse - I liked this one too, about the same as the first verse, I think you should take away that fading out tho, I wasn't really feeling it but thats just my opinion other may like it, I like the creativity about it tho

3rd Verse - I really enjoyed how you put Haiti into this verse. It just made it seem more real to me, and I could feel the emotion in it man, Keep it up!!

Overall this was an extremely good song and an enjoyable listen!! Keep em comin fam!!

Think you could return the feed?? viewtopic.php?f=38&t=82196

[mcZu]

Flow is shaky at some small spots, like the at the end of the third verse. Delivery sounds okay, and lyrically it's not bad. I love the chorus. Your mixing is ace. I enjoyed it man, nice track. Keep working and recording, you're getting better and better.

[YungNRuthless]

Verses was good, i felt they fell of here and there but the hook makes up for that, and the track its self is about a 7.5/10 i really felt this song the lyrics where amazing. Great job bro keep it up.

[Tash8]

thx guys