Young Fire & JMoney (THP) - Over Ft YungNRuthless

[youngfire420]

Me and my boy JMoney (We are a group called THP) got on this beat, with our homie YungNRuthless on the feature!

http://limelinx.com/files/ad4db1b9d9b33 ... 29f69fcaed

Listen, download, feedback!

[youngfire420]

Nothing....

[Tash8]

drake beatttttt, greattt

i see you lit a lighter there, smoking weed aren't ya hahha?

first guy, not bad, liked the flow---nice ending line

second guy, again not bad, good flow but bad delivery--need to put more into it...--have your girl gimme head, till she faceless-- haha clever

third guy, nice delivery...best verse on the song..

would love if you could feed my new song "weigh me down"

[youngfire420]

drake beatttttt, greattt

i see you lit a lighter there, smoking weed aren't ya hahha?

first guy, not bad, liked the flow---nice ending line

second guy, again not bad, good flow but bad delivery--need to put more into it...--have your girl gimme head, till she faceless-- haha clever

third guy, nice delivery...best verse on the song..

would love if you could feed my new song "weigh me down"

Actually that was me smoking a cig lol.

And thanks for the feedback, will return!

[TripleNineThree]

First Verse - I liked your lyrics, I think you could up the quality a little tho, and maybe throw some more mixing into it. Other than that it was pretty good. You had some pretty catchy lines in it too. Just throw some more emotion into your verses and they'd be really good

2nd verse - I liked this one more than the first, It had a little more emotion into it, and the quality sounded like it was better.. I don't know why. This dude had some pretty sick lines, not gonna lie. Better than the first, overall pretty good

3rd verse - I think I liked this one the most out of all 3. The quality could also be upped in this one. The mixing could be improve a bit as well.. But VERY NICE emotion on this verse. I liked the way you were flowin to it, and how much power you put behind your voice it sounded really sick!!

Overall this was a really good song keep it up fam!!
Think you could return the feed?? - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=82196

[youngfire420]

Thanks Will take your feedback into consideration.

Will return feedback!

[YungNRuthless]

drake beatttttt, greattt

i see you lit a lighter there, smoking weed aren't ya hahha?

first guy, not bad, liked the flow---nice ending line

second guy, again not bad, good flow but bad delivery--need to put more into it...--have your girl gimme head, till she faceless-- haha clever

third guy, nice delivery...best verse on the song..

would love if you could feed my new song "weigh me down"

I was the third guy, thank you sir. =)

First Verse - I liked your lyrics, I think you could up the quality a little tho, and maybe throw some more mixing into it. Other than that it was pretty good. You had some pretty catchy lines in it too. Just throw some more emotion into your verses and they'd be really good

2nd verse - I liked this one more than the first, It had a little more emotion into it, and the quality sounded like it was better.. I don't know why. This dude had some pretty sick lines, not gonna lie. Better than the first, overall pretty good

3rd verse - I think I liked this one the most out of all 3. The quality could also be upped in this one. The mixing could be improve a bit as well.. But VERY NICE emotion on this verse. I liked the way you were flowin to it, and how much power you put behind your voice it sounded really sick!!

Overall this was a really good song keep it up fam!!
Think you could return the feed?? - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=82196

I was the 3rd verse and thanks man.